I colored all the pics I posted. I'm going to post those when I get a chance to use the scanner again. Chapter 6 is coming soon.
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Is it love, or destiny?
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Thanks. Chapter 6 is put on hold. gotta get some ideas.....
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True. Things are also moving slower due to school.
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wow loved chapter 5 can't wait to read chapter 6 allysa
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Glitter Names!
The Sirianni's mother
The Sirianni's father
From Chapter Five
The Sirianni's mother
The Sirianni's father
From Chapter Five
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Chapter Six: Kadyn and the Keeper"It's time you forget what they've taught you, CamCam. Little Lysa misses you, especially."
"Sorry, I've been here too long to believe that your my brother."
"That woman you see everyday is your mother."
"No she's not. Goodbye, Sirianni!"
Allysa was explaining how Kadyn had dissappeared and how he'd been gone for two, now three days. She pulled her curly brown hair back into a perfect braid. Her locket sparkled against her pale skin, as her blue eyes burned passionately into Moe's. The sun shone brightly on Allysa, giving her an angelic glow. She was gorgeous.They were home.
"Moe, you might want to hide." Allysa whispered.
"Oh, right." He quickly found a hiding spot. Shayla came out with an angry look on her fragile face. Her golden hair flowed down in perfect waves, just touching her back, just as Mrs. Choler had worn her's. Her eyes were turning a dark brown, meaning she was angry as ever. She wore her dance practice clothes. There was nothing cuter on her but her prom dress.
"Shayla, I can explain EXACTLY what happened."
"Oh, I know what happened and your DEFINATELY never going to see the Jonathan kid again."
"Shayla, please! Let me explain!"
"Get inside. Your not going anywhere.'
Jen then grabbed Allysa, instinctively taking her to the Doodle's clubhouse. She called out for help, and out come Lisa Lennox. She and Shayla looked similar, almost like sisters. Lisa turned to face the girls, face twisted into an angry, shocked, wide eyed grin. She lunged after the girls and yanked them inside. The clubhouse was dark, so dark, you could only see your hand in front of your face. Allysa ran over to the lamp and turned the bright light on.
"Thanks, Dee."
"Shush!"
"Jenny already knows, right?"
"Yes, and I'm suppossed to."
"Well, I guess that's just great... What does he even see in a strange girl like you? You have this strange radience around you and it almost gives me the creeps..."
"I don't know what you're talking about."
"Nevermind, just get home. I called and explained everything to your sister, you'll be fine."
"Thank you, DeeDee. Thank you."
"Whatever."
Allysa was in her room. She pulled out a book she found in her mother's room year ago. It was filled with her parents poetry and songs. Family pictures and wonderful memories. Everything sweet and everyting nice. It was Mom's notebook. One song stood out, as if Allysa was supposed to hear it every night. Suddenly, She could hear music, a voice calling her name.
"Allysa, sing with me!" he called. It was Moe.
"Moe..."
"Sing with me." he said again, appearing through the window. He took her hand and began to sing.
Moe:
You are my passion
My weary soul
My broken heart
Mended as I lose control
Allysa:
You are my passion
My weary soul
My careful touch
Before my feelings roll
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control.
My passionate soul
Allysa:
It was harder to sing
Moe:
When all I had was gone
both:
And then you came in my life
And made a new song!
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control.
My passionate soul
Allysa:
My passionate soul........
Moe:
My passionate soul.....
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control. (x2)
My passionate
soul____________
"Allysa, you do realize, this means something. no voice has harmonized better with mine, not even my own siblings. Why, I never heard a more beautiful voic in my entire life!"
"Yet, you still wait? What do you REALLY want to say?"
"I... I love you."
There, they lock their hands and end they're scene.
*end Chapter 6*
*chapter 7 preview*
There the scene is set, as the days continue. Kadyn's disappearance, DeeDee's jealousy, and the love, or destiny, of two lovers ends the act, as now we have our Romeo and Juliet story begining. Shayla dislikes not being as close to her baby sister. What shall happen next? And the uestion remains, Is it Love, or Destiny?
"Sorry, I've been here too long to believe that your my brother."
"That woman you see everyday is your mother."
"No she's not. Goodbye, Sirianni!"
Allysa was explaining how Kadyn had dissappeared and how he'd been gone for two, now three days. She pulled her curly brown hair back into a perfect braid. Her locket sparkled against her pale skin, as her blue eyes burned passionately into Moe's. The sun shone brightly on Allysa, giving her an angelic glow. She was gorgeous.They were home.
"Moe, you might want to hide." Allysa whispered.
"Oh, right." He quickly found a hiding spot. Shayla came out with an angry look on her fragile face. Her golden hair flowed down in perfect waves, just touching her back, just as Mrs. Choler had worn her's. Her eyes were turning a dark brown, meaning she was angry as ever. She wore her dance practice clothes. There was nothing cuter on her but her prom dress.
"Shayla, I can explain EXACTLY what happened."
"Oh, I know what happened and your DEFINATELY never going to see the Jonathan kid again."
"Shayla, please! Let me explain!"
"Get inside. Your not going anywhere.'
Jen then grabbed Allysa, instinctively taking her to the Doodle's clubhouse. She called out for help, and out come Lisa Lennox. She and Shayla looked similar, almost like sisters. Lisa turned to face the girls, face twisted into an angry, shocked, wide eyed grin. She lunged after the girls and yanked them inside. The clubhouse was dark, so dark, you could only see your hand in front of your face. Allysa ran over to the lamp and turned the bright light on.
"Thanks, Dee."
"Shush!"
"Jenny already knows, right?"
"Yes, and I'm suppossed to."
"Well, I guess that's just great... What does he even see in a strange girl like you? You have this strange radience around you and it almost gives me the creeps..."
"I don't know what you're talking about."
"Nevermind, just get home. I called and explained everything to your sister, you'll be fine."
"Thank you, DeeDee. Thank you."
"Whatever."
Allysa was in her room. She pulled out a book she found in her mother's room year ago. It was filled with her parents poetry and songs. Family pictures and wonderful memories. Everything sweet and everyting nice. It was Mom's notebook. One song stood out, as if Allysa was supposed to hear it every night. Suddenly, She could hear music, a voice calling her name.
"Allysa, sing with me!" he called. It was Moe.
"Moe..."
"Sing with me." he said again, appearing through the window. He took her hand and began to sing.
Moe:
You are my passion
My weary soul
My broken heart
Mended as I lose control
Allysa:
You are my passion
My weary soul
My careful touch
Before my feelings roll
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control.
My passionate soul
Allysa:
It was harder to sing
Moe:
When all I had was gone
both:
And then you came in my life
And made a new song!
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control.
My passionate soul
Allysa:
My passionate soul........
Moe:
My passionate soul.....
both:
My_____ my passion,
My_____ my soul
When everything has broken
I will try not to lose control. (x2)
My passionate
soul____________
"Allysa, you do realize, this means something. no voice has harmonized better with mine, not even my own siblings. Why, I never heard a more beautiful voic in my entire life!"
"Yet, you still wait? What do you REALLY want to say?"
"I... I love you."
There, they lock their hands and end they're scene.
*end Chapter 6*
*chapter 7 preview*
There the scene is set, as the days continue. Kadyn's disappearance, DeeDee's jealousy, and the love, or destiny, of two lovers ends the act, as now we have our Romeo and Juliet story begining. Shayla dislikes not being as close to her baby sister. What shall happen next? And the uestion remains, Is it Love, or Destiny?
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wow good chapter allysa can;t wait to read the next one
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wooooooo!
i like it!!
i like it!!
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Thanks guys!!!!
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Chapter Seven: The Final Flower
A soft voice is heard in the night, as Moe quickly flung himself out the window to get home. The voice was calming, sweet, more than one could imagine. It was the Siriannis' mother, Amy.
"Allysa, time is running out, baby girl. I can only have you search for one more flower."
"Mom!" Allysa gasped as she threw her arms around the misty figure of her mother. It was a feeling every child loved, especially when their mother had been gone since they were only a child. Allysa had always loved her mother. It was her only way to know everything was alright.
"I've missed you too, baby girl. Now listen up. Your mission is to find a Golden rose. When you see it, pick it and bring it straight home. Put it in your orange vase and keep it until the next full moon. The night of the next full moon, take the flower to the treehouse and place it on the vanity. Stay in the treehouse until you hear your friends call for you. At this point, your brother will be released from the enemy's captivity, and the final fight shall begin. Don't worry, I'll be with you all the entire way."
"Wait, Kadyn's been captured?"
"Yes, baby girl." Amy said with a calm sigh.
"Don't worry, Momma, I'll do evrything in my power to see to it that Kaykay comes home safe, with Camcam at his side. We will be a family again. We WILL be a family again."
"I trust you, little Lysa. I trust you." As she said this, she disappeared.
"Allysa! I need some help!" Shayla called from downstairs. She sounded upset.
"Coming sissy!" Allysa cried as she threw her orange robe on. As she hurried down the stairs, orange dust flew off her robe, sparkling as if it was mist, colored by the light at sunset. Her hair began to change from curly and brown, to messy orange-red pigtails. Her skin became light orange, and her clothes changedfrom a robe and pjs, to her yellow dress and orange tights combo. By the time she was at the bottom, she was in Doodlebop form.
"Um, who are you, and why are you in my house?" Shayla asked, slightly frightened.
"Shayla, it's me!" Allysa said pushing her hands into her chest.
"No, your not my sister." Allysa looked down at herself. She went wide eyed and ran back upstairs, giving Shayla only enough time to stand up from her position on the floor. As quickly as she stood up, Shayla approached her younger sister's door. She laid her hand gently upon the rusty gold door knob. The door creeped open slowly. No one was there, but the window was wide open, red curtains blowing in the strong winds from outside. The floor was covered in a sparkling orange dust. Allysa was gone, and so was the strange orange colored girl Shayla had seen.
And all she could say was...
"But..."
It was cold this night. Kadyn was waiting for someone to find him. He had avoided death from his own brother, yet was still unable to escape the enemy's lair. Suddenly, he heard russling in the bushes outside. In the window, Allysa was creeping along, trying to be unseen on her way to the treehouse. He smiled, knowing this was his sign that everything would be okay. Just as he realized this, alarms went off all over. What was Kadyn to do? Could his baby sister hear him? Was it safe to even whisper?
Before he could think, he screamed, "Run, little Lysa! Run!"
And she did.
Moe was walking home, in desquise, of course. His last action was still on his mind. He had told Allysa his feelings. He had admitted the unadmitable. It was the most relieving feeling in the world to him. He was smiling, yet something inside him bothered him. As if from nowhere, he heard her voice.
"Moe! Help me out!"
"Allysa, where are you?"
"Over here!" She replied sticking her hand out from the trees. She had transformed.
"Allysa! How'd this happen?" Moe whispered loudly.
"I don't know, it was right after you left and my sister called for me to come down. She saw me like this! I didn't even know I'd tranformed!" She muttered worriedly.
"Well, don't worry, we'll get you back to normal. Shayla won't even know what happened."
"That's my issue, Moe. I used to tell my sister EVERYTHING. I mean, everything. She was the only person I trusted before, and then I met you and stopped talking to Shayla. I want to be able to tell her everything." Allysa said, begining to cry.
"Allysa, sweetie, if you want her to know, then go ahead and tell her."
"Are you sure it's okay?"
"Absolutely." He said, lifting her head by the chin and kissing her passionately.
The next morning, as Allysa awoke in her own bed, a golden rose began to bloom in her spring garden. Shayla began to freak out. Was she to pick it or leave it? She decided to leave it, just in case she felt bad about picking it right then. Allysa got dressed slowly, pulled her backpack out of the closet, and got ready for school. As she left, a glimmer of gold caught her eye. A golden petal, lying on the ground where a Golden rose should be. She frowned and moved on. Just before the bus came to get Shayla and Allysa, a Golden rose bloomed right beside Allysa in the crack of the sidewalk.
"The Golden rose!" She shouted as she picked in and ran it to her orange vase. The full moon was that Saturday. She would be prepared.
She would be prepared.
A soft voice is heard in the night, as Moe quickly flung himself out the window to get home. The voice was calming, sweet, more than one could imagine. It was the Siriannis' mother, Amy.
"Allysa, time is running out, baby girl. I can only have you search for one more flower."
"Mom!" Allysa gasped as she threw her arms around the misty figure of her mother. It was a feeling every child loved, especially when their mother had been gone since they were only a child. Allysa had always loved her mother. It was her only way to know everything was alright.
"I've missed you too, baby girl. Now listen up. Your mission is to find a Golden rose. When you see it, pick it and bring it straight home. Put it in your orange vase and keep it until the next full moon. The night of the next full moon, take the flower to the treehouse and place it on the vanity. Stay in the treehouse until you hear your friends call for you. At this point, your brother will be released from the enemy's captivity, and the final fight shall begin. Don't worry, I'll be with you all the entire way."
"Wait, Kadyn's been captured?"
"Yes, baby girl." Amy said with a calm sigh.
"Don't worry, Momma, I'll do evrything in my power to see to it that Kaykay comes home safe, with Camcam at his side. We will be a family again. We WILL be a family again."
"I trust you, little Lysa. I trust you." As she said this, she disappeared.
"Allysa! I need some help!" Shayla called from downstairs. She sounded upset.
"Coming sissy!" Allysa cried as she threw her orange robe on. As she hurried down the stairs, orange dust flew off her robe, sparkling as if it was mist, colored by the light at sunset. Her hair began to change from curly and brown, to messy orange-red pigtails. Her skin became light orange, and her clothes changedfrom a robe and pjs, to her yellow dress and orange tights combo. By the time she was at the bottom, she was in Doodlebop form.
"Um, who are you, and why are you in my house?" Shayla asked, slightly frightened.
"Shayla, it's me!" Allysa said pushing her hands into her chest.
"No, your not my sister." Allysa looked down at herself. She went wide eyed and ran back upstairs, giving Shayla only enough time to stand up from her position on the floor. As quickly as she stood up, Shayla approached her younger sister's door. She laid her hand gently upon the rusty gold door knob. The door creeped open slowly. No one was there, but the window was wide open, red curtains blowing in the strong winds from outside. The floor was covered in a sparkling orange dust. Allysa was gone, and so was the strange orange colored girl Shayla had seen.
And all she could say was...
"But..."
It was cold this night. Kadyn was waiting for someone to find him. He had avoided death from his own brother, yet was still unable to escape the enemy's lair. Suddenly, he heard russling in the bushes outside. In the window, Allysa was creeping along, trying to be unseen on her way to the treehouse. He smiled, knowing this was his sign that everything would be okay. Just as he realized this, alarms went off all over. What was Kadyn to do? Could his baby sister hear him? Was it safe to even whisper?
Before he could think, he screamed, "Run, little Lysa! Run!"
And she did.
Moe was walking home, in desquise, of course. His last action was still on his mind. He had told Allysa his feelings. He had admitted the unadmitable. It was the most relieving feeling in the world to him. He was smiling, yet something inside him bothered him. As if from nowhere, he heard her voice.
"Moe! Help me out!"
"Allysa, where are you?"
"Over here!" She replied sticking her hand out from the trees. She had transformed.
"Allysa! How'd this happen?" Moe whispered loudly.
"I don't know, it was right after you left and my sister called for me to come down. She saw me like this! I didn't even know I'd tranformed!" She muttered worriedly.
"Well, don't worry, we'll get you back to normal. Shayla won't even know what happened."
"That's my issue, Moe. I used to tell my sister EVERYTHING. I mean, everything. She was the only person I trusted before, and then I met you and stopped talking to Shayla. I want to be able to tell her everything." Allysa said, begining to cry.
"Allysa, sweetie, if you want her to know, then go ahead and tell her."
"Are you sure it's okay?"
"Absolutely." He said, lifting her head by the chin and kissing her passionately.
The next morning, as Allysa awoke in her own bed, a golden rose began to bloom in her spring garden. Shayla began to freak out. Was she to pick it or leave it? She decided to leave it, just in case she felt bad about picking it right then. Allysa got dressed slowly, pulled her backpack out of the closet, and got ready for school. As she left, a glimmer of gold caught her eye. A golden petal, lying on the ground where a Golden rose should be. She frowned and moved on. Just before the bus came to get Shayla and Allysa, a Golden rose bloomed right beside Allysa in the crack of the sidewalk.
"The Golden rose!" She shouted as she picked in and ran it to her orange vase. The full moon was that Saturday. She would be prepared.
She would be prepared.
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wow that was a really good chapter allysa can't wait to read chapter 8 whenever u get a chance to write it and post it on here
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Chapter Eight: It's Almost Time.
There was nothing left to do but wait. It was saturday, and the plan had been explained to everyone. Everyone, except Shayla.
"Shayla, I need to talk to you."
"I was about to say the same thing. What is up with you?"
"That's what I wanted to talk to you about. You see, I've been keeping secrets from you."
"Well no kidding! I don't understand, though. We've always been close. You've always told me everything and I did the same."
"Just hear me out." Allysa whispered as she put her hand over her locket. Slowly, an orange dust swirled around her, and she transformed into her Doodlebop form.
"Wait, you're-"
"My name is Allysa Sirianni, I am one with the Doodlebop curse."
"Curse?"
"The Doodlebops are cursed with the inability to live in normal society with how they really look. Most of their family uses magic to hide their true identities. Magic protects us from becoming one, most better than others. I am one of the three lucky in that I can transform."
"Is that really how it is?"
"Sadly, yes."
"And that Jonathan kid is really?"
"I told you his last name was Welxer, right? He is Moe."
"And can you explain why you've been hanging out with him?"
"Well, It's because....."
"Well?"
"I... I kinda sorta....."
"Spit it out!"
"I love him."
"Oh, wow."
"Look, we're all going to need your help...."
That night, Allysa took the flower to the tree house and placed it on the vanity. She went bacvk up to the door, listening for her signal. She was listening for the sound of singing.
Hours on end, she waited for her friends to call. suddenly, a knock came.
"Allysa, can I come in?"
"Moe? I'm not sure I'm allowed-"
"I'm the only other person here right now. I want to wait with you."
"But what if-"
"Please."
Allysa smiled and opened the door. Moe was dressed up in his best (meaning his vest wasn't on). He sat down next to Allysa and pulled her close. She rested her head on his chest, slowly falling asleep.
♪Allysa, It's almost time!♪
Allysa jerked awake, making Moe jump slightly. She got up and hurried down, transforming with each little step she took. Moe followed, reaching the group only seconds after Allysa.
Meanwhile....
"Camryn Alex Sirianni, you listen to me!"
"I told you a million time Sirianni is not my name! Get out of my life!"
"Camryn! You can't tell me you don't remember your two baby sisters whom you loved! Is there not a single thought of those two beautiful girls?"
"How'd you know about my thoughts?"
"Camryn, I'm your brother. I got to watch those girls grow up. They are both in High school now!"
"There's no way!"
"It's been years, brother."
"It's not possible." Camryn fell to his knees. "I just saw them yesterday. They were only babies!"
"No, Camryn, it's been years. Look at yourself."
Camryn looked in the mirror for the first time since he'd been kidnapped. He saw how much he'd grown himself. He then looked at his brother and realized how much they looked alike. There was no way they weren't brothers.
"Kadyn."
"Camryn."
"I'm sorry, Kadyn. I'm sorry. I didn't realize."
"It's okay, but I'm going to need some help getting out of here if we're going to save Baby Lysa and Shayla."
"We?"
"Yes, brother, We."
Alarms go off. A battle is about to be fought.
And a family soon reunited.
There was nothing left to do but wait. It was saturday, and the plan had been explained to everyone. Everyone, except Shayla.
"Shayla, I need to talk to you."
"I was about to say the same thing. What is up with you?"
"That's what I wanted to talk to you about. You see, I've been keeping secrets from you."
"Well no kidding! I don't understand, though. We've always been close. You've always told me everything and I did the same."
"Just hear me out." Allysa whispered as she put her hand over her locket. Slowly, an orange dust swirled around her, and she transformed into her Doodlebop form.
"Wait, you're-"
"My name is Allysa Sirianni, I am one with the Doodlebop curse."
"Curse?"
"The Doodlebops are cursed with the inability to live in normal society with how they really look. Most of their family uses magic to hide their true identities. Magic protects us from becoming one, most better than others. I am one of the three lucky in that I can transform."
"Is that really how it is?"
"Sadly, yes."
"And that Jonathan kid is really?"
"I told you his last name was Welxer, right? He is Moe."
"And can you explain why you've been hanging out with him?"
"Well, It's because....."
"Well?"
"I... I kinda sorta....."
"Spit it out!"
"I love him."
"Oh, wow."
"Look, we're all going to need your help...."
That night, Allysa took the flower to the tree house and placed it on the vanity. She went bacvk up to the door, listening for her signal. She was listening for the sound of singing.
Hours on end, she waited for her friends to call. suddenly, a knock came.
"Allysa, can I come in?"
"Moe? I'm not sure I'm allowed-"
"I'm the only other person here right now. I want to wait with you."
"But what if-"
"Please."
Allysa smiled and opened the door. Moe was dressed up in his best (meaning his vest wasn't on). He sat down next to Allysa and pulled her close. She rested her head on his chest, slowly falling asleep.
♪Allysa, It's almost time!♪
Allysa jerked awake, making Moe jump slightly. She got up and hurried down, transforming with each little step she took. Moe followed, reaching the group only seconds after Allysa.
Meanwhile....
"Camryn Alex Sirianni, you listen to me!"
"I told you a million time Sirianni is not my name! Get out of my life!"
"Camryn! You can't tell me you don't remember your two baby sisters whom you loved! Is there not a single thought of those two beautiful girls?"
"How'd you know about my thoughts?"
"Camryn, I'm your brother. I got to watch those girls grow up. They are both in High school now!"
"There's no way!"
"It's been years, brother."
"It's not possible." Camryn fell to his knees. "I just saw them yesterday. They were only babies!"
"No, Camryn, it's been years. Look at yourself."
Camryn looked in the mirror for the first time since he'd been kidnapped. He saw how much he'd grown himself. He then looked at his brother and realized how much they looked alike. There was no way they weren't brothers.
"Kadyn."
"Camryn."
"I'm sorry, Kadyn. I'm sorry. I didn't realize."
"It's okay, but I'm going to need some help getting out of here if we're going to save Baby Lysa and Shayla."
"We?"
"Yes, brother, We."
Alarms go off. A battle is about to be fought.
And a family soon reunited.
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wow chapter 8 was really good allysa can;t wait to read chapter 9