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    Crying Inside (poem I wrote)

    orangeskittles
    orangeskittles


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    Post by orangeskittles Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:42 pm

    So, this is a poem I wrote when I was going through a tough time. I was madly in love with this guy, only to find out he didn’t like me, and actually he ended up making out with one of my close friends instead. so, (warning) this poem is really deep and angry.


    Crying Inside

    Anger, Pain
    Should I cry out or be ashamed
    You broke my heart
    How does it feel?
    Do you even care?
    Lies,
    You said you just talked,
    Three others say not,
    I want to forget
    I want to cry
    I hate you!
    Get out of my head,
    Let me be,
    Let me lie,
    Crying inside : (

    Ps. I did end up forgiving the guy, and also the girl who did this to me, cause I don’t like to hold grudges, but it hurt. : (
    orangeskittles
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    Post by orangeskittles Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:53 pm

    no comments? lol
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    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ Sat May 29, 2010 6:52 pm

    First other person comment! I love it! Poetry is for feeling! Wonderful job!

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