This is my very first poem that i've ever wrote. So I decided to share it with evreyone. I really want your opinion on it. hope you like it. It's called......
~My Life~
by: Kadyn Christainsen
As I sit wondering about my life,
Everyday, every useless night.
I wonder where my life will lead,
Will it lead anywhere? Do you agree?
Will I have someone or be alone,
Alone? There's a scary word, i've known.
Life sucks, it truly sucks for me,
I've lost friends, I've lost lovers, and everything in between.
But life always gets better, right?
I hope so, I desperately need the light.
Despite all i've been through,
All the fights and issues.
One day i'll have everything I need,
I will have it all, yes indeed.
~My Life~
by: Kadyn Christainsen
As I sit wondering about my life,
Everyday, every useless night.
I wonder where my life will lead,
Will it lead anywhere? Do you agree?
Will I have someone or be alone,
Alone? There's a scary word, i've known.
Life sucks, it truly sucks for me,
I've lost friends, I've lost lovers, and everything in between.
But life always gets better, right?
I hope so, I desperately need the light.
Despite all i've been through,
All the fights and issues.
One day i'll have everything I need,
I will have it all, yes indeed.
Last edited by BloodLord on Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:02 am; edited 1 time in total