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    My First Poem

    MasterOfEvil
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    Post by MasterOfEvil Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:42 pm

    This is my very first poem that i've ever wrote. So I decided to share it with evreyone. I really want your opinion on it. hope you like it. It's called......

    ~My Life~
    by: Kadyn Christainsen

    As I sit wondering about my life,
    Everyday, every useless night.
    I wonder where my life will lead,
    Will it lead anywhere? Do you agree?
    Will I have someone or be alone,
    Alone? There's a scary word, i've known.
    Life sucks, it truly sucks for me,
    I've lost friends, I've lost lovers, and everything in between.

    But life always gets better, right?
    I hope so, I desperately need the light.
    Despite all i've been through,
    All the fights and issues.
    One day i'll have everything I need,
    I will have it all, yes indeed.


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    Post by Guest Thu Apr 30, 2009 8:59 pm

    wow i think this poem is going make me cry now kadyn Sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
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    Post by MasterOfEvil Fri May 01, 2009 12:59 am

    so sorry, jen
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    Post by Guest Fri May 01, 2009 12:45 pm

    This should be in the Poetry board on here.
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    Post by Guest Fri May 01, 2009 8:10 pm

    it is ok kadyn i was only joking
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    Post by orangeskittles Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:50 pm

    that was really good kadyn! i liked it!

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