A unnamed poem by me.

As darkness feels my soul,
Just like the evilness of a troll.

I'm reminded of the fun times in the past,
How I miss those time we've had a blast.

But sadly, those times died,
Now they are replace with the tears i've cried.

I truly hate this life I live,
Why can't we just forgive?

I guess this is truly how things were meant to be,
My very soul deep undersea.

Woah, deep man. Mind if I share that with my creative writing class?

Go ahead =3

wow cam that is really good and i kind of know how u feel right now

Thanks! I'll make sure to give you credit!

Thanks! ^.^ I'm glad u liked it enough 2 want 2 share it =D

ur welcome cam

I hope 2 write anotha soon =P

that was realy good cam! =)

oh i hope so too cam

That's good, Camryn, I can't wait to read another. =]

Sophitia_Destiny wrote:That's good, Camryn, I can't wait to read another. =]

Glad ya liked it. & I'll see what I can do. =/

My creative writing class is about to start out poetry unit!