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    the twin chronicles: Book one: Mr. H's Myserious Disapperance

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sat May 29, 2010 7:33 pm

    Characters
    Allysa-
    Teacher at CBMS. Left Canada, "twin" Shayla, and "sisters" Jennifer and Kelsey. She plans to come back home after a year of teaching in her original home, Knoxville, TN. Two people are out to get her, one good and one bad. One is a guy that she actually needs and the other is a crazed jerk who turned out to be a murderer.

    Shayla-
    Allysa's "twin". No job. Dated a criminal at one point, and didn't listen to Allysa when she had one of her "Feelings". Always calls Allysa to check up.

    Jen-
    Works at Walmart with Kelsey to keep up the rent. Kinda mute in this book. She doesn't speak unless Allysa's home and actually in front of her. speaks more later in the series.

    Kelsey-
    Works at Walmart with Jen. ENTIRELY consumed with making sure Allysa is happy in this book. Kelsey calms down when Allysa comes home in the winter. Kelsey throws a huge welcome home party.

    Mr. H-
    Mysterious teacher at CBMS. Allysa takes intrest in him on her first day at work. He seems familier, but also not at the same time.

    Ms. Winstead-
    Unmarried daughter of the principal of CBMS for two years of Allysa's CBMS career. Became principal of CBMS shortly before Allysa's arrival.

    Spencer-
    One of the people after Allysa. You decide, good or bad.

    Caleb-
    Same as above.

    I'm fixing it up right now. This is an old story of mine that I originally wasn't going to post, but I'm not going to hold out on my family. Lovez youz!


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    Re: the twin chronicles: Book one: Mr. H's Myserious Disapperance

    Post by kittyfan on Mon May 31, 2010 1:44 pm

    oh wow cool can;t wait to read it since i am in it hahaha
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    Re: the twin chronicles: Book one: Mr. H's Myserious Disapperance

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon May 31, 2010 3:51 pm

    First chapter coming soon. i'm trying to lengthen it more than the original chapter.
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    Post by kittyfan on Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:48 am

    cool can't wait to read it allysa
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    Chapter 1: The Escape

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:38 pm

    Chapter One

    "Say your prayers, Mrs. Lennox. This is your final goodbye."

    "Never!"

    "Goodbye, Allysa Marie Lennox. Your sisters are mine."

    "Yeah, right."

    That's when I dodged the bullet for the first time. I ran as he took in the fact that I just broke his never missed a shot record. Once I was out of his sight, he ran after me. I had to get to my car. If I could distract him long enough, my sisters would be safe. The best way to do so was to have him chase me instead of Shayla and Jen. Why he didn't chase Kelsey, I didn't know, but she was basically safe. I held my knife in one hand, gun in the other. He shot again. Scraped my arm enough to make me bleed. Not good. I shot back. Got him in the leg. He was at his car when I got to mine. I had to hurry. I drove to the border and got my passport out. The let me through, and I hurried to my friend in New York. The car was hidden in an underground storage vault. I was hidden in my friend's guest bedroom. Next day, I got to my sister in Maryland and hid there. He was hot on my trail, but came to a dead end with my sister. I got lucky. He stayed a night in a hotel, just to search the next day. I left early the next morning. I made it to Tennessee. I drove into Knoxville, where he caught me and chased me down to the middle of Bob Gray road. I jumped out of my car, with no other choice but to fight him off. I stabbed him several times, but he kept grabbing the knife. I finally pushed him off, and he shot me. I fell back into the creek, and swam to the other side. He drove off, thinking I'd die. He was wrong.

    "My cell phone! It's still in the car!" I said to myself. I went across the creek again, and got my cell phone out of my car. I dialed Shayla's number.

    "Hey Shayla? It's Allysa."

    I told her what had happened.She finally believed me about her boyfriend. She cried.

    "I shouldn't have left you there. Where's the car?" Shayla said after calming down a bit.

    "I've got it sis. Don't worry. I'll bring it home when it's safe." I replied.

    "Okay, well, be careful. I don't need to lose a sister."

    "Don't worry. I'm in Knoxville, so we've got family that can care for me."

    "Okay. Bye sissy."

    "Bye."

    I found a small log cabin. The creek ran right by it. So did my blood. I went inside and lay down on the beat up couch. This was my only place to stay. It would have to do. Three days later, I applied for a teaching job. I was accepted, at CBMS. My old middle school. Great. I'd have to sleep and dream about the old school. The person I miss the most from middle school is Michael Hutchison. He was probably my closest friend. I couldn't wait to go back to the same school we went to as kids. I fell asleep on the forth night in Knoxville feeling good, with my 8th grade yearbook on top on my face, turned to the picture of Michael. I was proud.
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    Post by kittyfan on Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:18 pm

    wow good chapter allysa


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