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    Butterfly_of_Werewolves

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    Quiet Nights in Neardeath

    Post by Butterfly_of_Werewolves on Sat May 09, 2009 9:50 am

    My newest story has come form a recent dream of mine. Let me tell you a bit about Neardeath.

    Neardeath is a small town in the middle of nowhere. Everyone there has had a near death expirance(Obviously where the name came from.)

    Any more I tell gives away the story.

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    Anastasia~~~~~Anastasia nearly died in the military. She only survived because her true love sacraficed himself. She moved here so she could forget about it. The only thing keeping her from forgeting him is her son,Camron.

    Camron~~~~~Camron is Anastsia's son. He was named after his parents good friend. He looks tons like his father. He's only one,and all he can say is,"Sammuel" and tries not to. He doesn't like seeing his mom cry and that tends to make her cry.

    Mike~~~~~~Young Man who seems to care for Anastasia. He calls her Anni.

    Sammuel~~~~~~Every now and then a chapter will come up in Sammy's view. He is Anni's True love. He has survived the hit and is trying to find his girl. He is in some sort of contact with Mike.

    The first chapter will be coming soon.
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    Re: Quiet Nights in Neardeath

    Post by kittyfan on Sat May 09, 2009 9:56 am

    oh good allysa i can't wait
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    Chapter 1

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:26 pm

    "Anni? Anni? Where'd you go?"

    "Mike? Where's Camron?"

    "He's here."

    As the sun set on that fateful day in Neardeath, I and my young son, Camron, took to our new home. Mike cared about myself and Camron more than his own brother. I thought it was creepy. As we came to our bedroom, I climbed into the double bed, gentally laying Camron down next to me. Mike left the room. His phone rang. It was his brother.

    "Michael? Where the hell are you?"

    "Anni's and Camron's place. I was making sure they were-"

    "That's Sammy's chick! You need to keep her under survalence. She's a traitor."

    "She probably has no idea of the fued."

    "She might."

    I couldn't sleep. Camron kept saying, "Sammuel." Over and over in his sleep. I wondered if Sammy might be still alive if I'd never switched the pregnancy tests for my bestie and I in the milatary records so that I'd be with Sammuel. She then became preganant a week later with her husband's child. If that could've been Sammuel and I, we would have been blessed. Absolutely blessed. Camron would be with a father. A man who could run the house, teach him to be a man, a complete family. Complete. That's what I am not. A complete mother.

    "Excuse me, Anastasia?"

    "Um, yes? What do you need, Ma'm?"

    "I just got news from the military base your husband was stationed at. His body has disappeared."

    Sammuel. Sammuel Lee Myer. Sammuel Lee Myer's body is gone. You're kidding. No way. I can't speak.

    "Anastasia?"

    "Thank you for letting me know. May I mourn in peace?"

    "Yes,of course, dear."

    "Thank you."

    Camron woke up to the sound of my crying. He hated it when I cried, but this was joy. Sammuel could be alive! Camron's daddy! He could have a complete family! Camron wiped my tears and smiled when he saw mine. Who knew that a child's smile could make me so happy? Nothing made me happy these days. Nothing. At all. And Camron found my weakness. My one year old son. Our one year old son. I just KNEW that Sammuel was alive. I knew it.

    And he began to see the hope in my eyes.
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    Chapter 2

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:33 pm

    *Sammuel*
    I wasn't quite ready to leave. My friend, Caleb knew it. I couldn't pick up and walk away from everyone. He knew I'd come back. I only had to find my sweet Anastasia. I only had to see my son. Once. Even if only once. I had to.

    "Be careful. I'll send you out to Mike. He'll guide you from there."

    "Thanks, Caleb. I'm glad you could help."

    "Anything for you and your wife."

    And with that, I was off. Anastasia would find out and begin to look for me, somehow. I knew it. She and Camron. Camron. My son. Why did this have to happen as they were sending us home? Camron. My first born. My first born son. Who has my son? Did my Anastasia keep him, or send him to someone else? Does she get to smile upon him every morning, or does she mourn the loss of her husband and the incapability to care for her son?

    *Flashback*
    "Hurry, get to the base!"

    "Wait! Don't close the gate!"

    "Anastasia! Look out!"

    As the enemy fired, I threw myself in front of her to take the hit for my girl. Camron and Anastasia would live another day. They'd try to declare me dead the next day. I'd be alive.

    *End Flashback*

    Camron was waiting for a father. His father. The only one who would know his son, his feelings, his life. Camron needed a father. A real father. One who cared. One who loved. One who lived. He needed me....

    *Anastasia*
    He was being too sweet. I didn't even know the kid. Who was he really? A tratior? A friend? I'd have to find out.

    "Mike? Did you know Sammuel Myer?"

    "Yeah, my family hated him. I didn't, but that's just me."

    "Can I trust you with something?"

    "Anything, Anni. Anything."

    "Sammuel was my husband. He let himself die for me. At least, that's what everyone thinks. Would you believe that there's a possiblity that he's still alive?"

    "With God, anything's possible."

    "Thanks, Mike. That helps, a lot."

    I could trust him. Maybe Michael was different than his brother. Maybe. I still won't tell him everything. I still need to watch my back. I still need to keep an eye out. Wish me luck there. I can barely focus.
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    Re: Quiet Nights in Neardeath

    Post by kittyfan on Tue Oct 05, 2010 3:34 pm

    wow this story is really good so far allysa i can't wait to read somemore of it Very Happy

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