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    What I Gave Up

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    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

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    What I Gave Up

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Feb 20, 2011 3:36 pm

    Characters-


    (left to right)
    Allison-15-left to die at the age of 5
    Amanda-16-abused by her father
    Darlena-17-raped by her ex
    Cassy-17-stalked by a killer

    (left to right)
    Daniel-17-hidden prince
    Alexander-15-Daniel's brother, hidden prince
    Caden-Daniel's best friend
    Amour-Exchange student

    Introduction
    Each girl had a secret. Each girl had a heart.

    Each heart was broken.

    Allison was little when it had happened. Her parents were drunkards. They got into a fight, nearly killing their child. To hide the evidence, Allison was thrown in a ditch.

    Amanda was a sweet girl. Everything in her life was perfect, or so they thought. Being a single father, Mr. Tigra had a lot of stress on him. He took it out on her.

    Darlena had broken up with her boyfriend. Everyone warned her to stay near her friends at all times. She didn't listen.

    Cassy's family was a big target for the biggest gang in town. The best bounty hunter there was part of it. She soon discovered that he was after her.

    Each boy had a secret. Each boy saw a heart.

    Each heart belong to a girl.

    Daniel saw a beautiful girl, blonde hair and blue eyes. She seemed broken, yet put together all the same. He fell in love instantly.

    Alexander was sitting under his favorite tree. A girl was sitting along the edge of a creek, alone. She skipped a stone and made a wish. Then they're eyes met.

    Caden was the son of the best bounty hunter in town. He knew the girl his dad hunted every day. He hated his dad for chasing her.

    Amour had no choice. He had to find someone who could keep him in that country. That's when he met her.
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    BloodLord

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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by BloodLord on Sun Feb 20, 2011 5:06 pm

    That was eccellente! I can't wait to read more. =)
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    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Feb 20, 2011 5:35 pm

    Smile This actually seems pretty good now that I look at it again.
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    BloodLord

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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by BloodLord on Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:15 pm

    It will get better. =)
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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by kittyfan on Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:24 pm

    wow can't wait to read it allysa


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    MasterOfEvil
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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Sun Feb 20, 2011 9:09 pm

    Awesome! I wana read more!


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    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:42 am

    Smile This encourages me even more. I have a feeling this will be my best story yet.
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    kittyfan
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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by kittyfan on Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:35 pm

    i hope so since u have not finish ur other two stories lol


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    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:26 am

    2 stories? I have like four other stories.
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    Re: What I Gave Up

    Post by kittyfan on Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:30 pm

    oh right i forgot but i know u do need to finish them lol


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