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    01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Tue Jan 11, 2011 10:13 pm

    Ark II Cast
    Jonah: Terry Lester
    Ruth: Jean Marie Hon
    Samuel: Jose Flores
    Adam the talking chimp

    The Blue Family
    Joniah Blue: Me
    Joniah's mother, Brenda Blue: Eve Whittle
    Joniah's favorite aunt, Brenda's twin sister, Brendaleigh Blue: Terri Irwin
    Joniah's younger sister, Brooke Blue: Briana Vega E6
    Joniah's younger sister, Emily Blue: Emily Osment
    Joniah's younger sister, Gabrielle Blue: Bridget Mendler
    Joniah's younger sister, Katarina Blue: Keetin Marchi E2
    Joniah's younger sister, Nancy Blue: Nicole Anderson
    Joniah's younger sister, Olivia Blue: Kelsey Schultz E5
    Joniah's younger sister, Robin Blue: Rachel Lofton E3

    The triplets
    Joniah's younger sister, Aaliyah Blue: Allison Stoner
    Joniah's younger sister, Alice Blue: Elisabeth Harnois
    Joniah's younger sister, Adrienne Blue: Ashley Tisdale

    The quintuplets
    Joniah's younger sister, Cecilia Blue: Christy Carlson Romano
    Joniah's younger sister, Carol Blue: Chelsea Myers E1
    Joniah's younger sister, Camille Blue: Caroline from ZOOM
    Joniah's younger sister, Carson Blue: Calley Payne E2
    Joniah's younger sister, Christiana Blue: Christa Scholtz E2

    The twins
    Joniah's younger sister, Drew Blue: Demi Lovato
    Joniah's younger sister, Danielle Blue: Daniela Bustamante E4

    The twins
    Joniah's younger sister, Jayda Blue: Lindi Oest E3
    Joniah's younger sister, Judith Blue: Jenna Jimenez E1

    The twins
    Joniah's younger sister, Melissa Blue: Miley Cyrus
    Joniah's younger sister, Mara Blue: Leslie Powell E6

    The quadruplets
    Joniah's younger sister, Stephanie Blue: Julianna Rose Mauriello
    Joniah's younger sister, Stella Blue: Chelsea Staub
    Joniah's younger sister, Sarah Blue: Sarah Baker E3
    Joniah's younger sister, Shannon Blue: Selena Gomez


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    Chapter 1
    Jonah's Precious Treasure

    SCHEIMER/GUNDEN: For millions of years, Earth was fertile and rich. Then pollution and waste began to take their toll. Civilization fell into ruin. This is the world of the 25th Century. Only a handful of scientists remain, men who have vowed to rebuild what has been destroyed. This is their achievement --- Ark II, a mobile storehouse of scientific knowledge, manned by a highly trained crew of young people. Their mission: to bring the hope of a new future to mankind.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #1: I, Jonah, Ruth, Samuel, and Adam are fully aware of the dangers we will face as we venture into unknown, maybe even hostile, areas. But we're determined to bring the promise of a new civilization to our people and to our planet.
    One day in the year 2476 a beautiful young girl named Joniah Blue was being chased by some scavengers who work for the War Lord Brack. Just then a big mechine called the Ark II was driving down the road when the commander of the Ark II named Jonah spotted her and saw that she was in trouble he slammed on the breaks. Jonah came out of the cockpit of the Ark II and to where his friends Samuel, Ruth and Adam a talking chimp where at.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #27: Our mission is to rescue a girl who is being chased by a group of scavengers.
    SAMUEL: Jonah what happened?
    JONAH: There's a girl out there being chased by a group of scavengers.
    RUTH: Sounds like she needs our help.
    JONAH: You're right Ruth, she does need our help.
    So Jonah and his friends went outside to see where Joniah the girl being chased by the scavengers was at and when they got closer to where she was Jonah got a good look at her and fell in love with her. As soon as Jonah and his friends got a little closer the scavengers captured her and took her away.
    SCAVENGER #1: Won't War Lord Brack be glad to have her.
    SCAVENGER #2: I agree she is the most beautiful girl around.
    JONIAH: Let me go!
    JONAH: Let's get back to the Ark and get the Roamer.
    RUTH: Why Jonah?
    JONAH: I know where they are taking her.
    SAMUEL: Where?
    JONAH: I'll tell you in the Roamer.
    ~Meanwhile at War Lord Brack's Camp~
    The scavengers just brought Joniah to War Lord Brack.
    WAR LORD BRACK: What's your name beautifu?
    JONIAH: I'm not telling you. Now I demand you to release me at once!
    WAR LORD BRACK: You demand me to release you?
    JONIAH: That's right.
    WAR LORD BRACK: I won't release you.
    JONIAH: You can't keep me locked up forever. By the way who are you?
    WAR LORD BRACK: I'm War Lord Brack. Now what is your name?
    JONIAH: It's, um, Nia.
    WAR LORD BRACK: Well, Nia how would you like to be my girl?
    JONIAH: In your dreams, War Lord. I'll never be your girl.
    WAR LORD BRACK (as he threw Joniah in a cave and locked it up): Fine than if you won't be my girl than you can rot here for all I care.
    ~Meanwhile in the Ark Roamer with Jonah and his friends~
    SAMUEL: So Jonah are you going to tell us exactly where we are going?
    JONAH: We are going to the camp of War Lord Brack.
    RUTH AND SAMUEL War Lord Brack!?!
    RUTH: Why are we going there?
    JONAH: That's where the scavengers have taken that girl they were chasing earlier.
    RUTH: What does War Lord Brack want with her?
    JONAH: I'm not sure but we are going there and rescue her no matter what it takes.
    SAMUEL: Why is rescuing her so important to you, Jonah?
    JONAH: I rather not say right now.
    ~Meanwhile back at War Lord Brack's Camp~
    A few minutes after War Lord Brack and his scavengers went off to eat, Joniah broke out into song and sang "Dreamlover" by Mariah Carey. But what Joniah doesn't know is that War Lord Brack and his scavengers are listening to her sing.
    JONIAH (singing): Ooh
    Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu ooh, baby
    Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu ooh, baby
    (Oh yea)

    I need a lover to give me
    The kind of love that will last always
    I need somebody uplifting
    To take me away babe
    Oh yea yea

    I want a lover who knows me
    Who understands how I feel inside
    Someone to comfort and hold me
    Through the long, lonely nights
    Till the dawn
    Why don't you take me away

    Dreamlover come rescue me
    Take me up take me down
    Take me anywhere you want to baby now
    I need you so desperately
    Won't you please come around
    'Cause I wanna share forever with you baby
    (Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu ooh)
    With you baby, hey

    I don't want another pretender, na
    To disillusion me one more time
    Whisperin' words are forever
    Playin' with my mind
    No, no, no, no, no, no baby

    I need someone to hold on to
    The kind of love that won't fly away
    I just want someone to belong to
    Everyday
    Of my life
    Always
    So come and take me away

    Dreamlover come rescue me
    Take me up take me down
    Take me anywhere you want to baby now
    I need you so desperately
    Won't you please come around
    'Cause I wanna share forever with you baby
    (Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu)
    Baby, ooh, ooh yea
    (Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu ooh, yea yea)
    (Tu tu ru tu tu tu tu)
    Baby come and take me

    Dreamlover come rescue me
    Take me up take me down
    Take me anywhere you want to baby now
    I need you so desperately
    Won't you please come around
    'Cause I wanna share forever with you baby
    (Tu turutu tu ohh, ohh ohh)
    (Tu turutu tu ohh, ohh ohh)

    Dreamlover come rescue me
    Take me up take me down
    Take me anywhere you want to baby now
    I need you so desperately
    Won't you please come around
    'Cause I wanna share forever with you baby.

    As soon as she was finished with the song Jonah and his friends showed up in the Roamer.
    JONAH: War Lord Brack, why have you captured that young girl over there?
    WAR LORD BRACK: I'm not telling you why.
    When Joniah saw Jonah she fell in love with him. Just then Ruth and Samuel caused a diversion so that Jonah can go and rescue Joniah.
    JONAH (as he got out his laser): Stand back.
    Jonah used his laser on the lock and a few minutes later the lock was broken and Jonah helped Joniah out of there and took her to the Roamer to wait for Samuel and Ruth. A few minutes later Jonah, his friends and Joniah were now back inside the Ark.
    JONAH: What's your name?
    JONIAH: Joniah Blue.
    JONAH: I'm Jonah.
    RUTH: I'm Ruth.
    SAMUEL: I'm Samuel.
    ADAM: And I'm Adam.
    When Joniah saw Adam she couldn't believe her eyes.
    JONIAH: A talking chimp. I've never seen a talking chimp before.
    JONAH: What did War Lord Brack want with you?
    JONIAH: Didn't he tell you?
    JONAH: No he wouldn't tell me.
    JONIAH: Oh, I see. I guess he didn't want you to know that he wanted me to be his girl.
    RUTH: Why is that?
    JONIAH: Well he told me that I was the most beautiful girl that he has ever seen.
    JONAH (under his breath): He's got that right.
    JONIAH: What was that Jonah?
    JONAH: Nothing. Nothing at all.
    JONIAH: Oh, Jonah, I almost forgot to thank you back there.
    JONAH: Thank me for what?
    JONIAH: For rescuing me and with that you are truly my hero.
    And with that Joniah broke out into song and sang "Hero" by Mariah Carey.
    JONIAH (singing): There's a hero
    If you look inside your heart
    You don't have to be afraid
    Of what you are
    There's an answer
    If you reach into your soul
    And the sorrow that you know
    Will melt away

    And then a hero comes along
    With the strength to carry on
    And you cast your fears aside
    And you know you can survive
    So when you feel like hope is gone
    Look inside you and be strong
    And you'll finally see the truth
    That a hero lies in you

    It's a long road
    When you face the world alone
    No one reaches out a hand
    For you to hold
    You can find love
    If you search within yourself
    And the emptiness you felt
    Will disappear

    And then a hero comes along
    With the strength to carry on
    And you cast your fears aside
    And you know you can survive
    So when you feel like hope is gone
    Look inside you and be strong
    And you'll finally see the truth
    That a hero lies in you

    Lord knows
    Dreams are hard to follow
    But don't let anyone
    Tear them away, hey yeah
    Just hold on
    There will be tomorrow
    In time
    You'll find the way

    And then a hero comes along
    With the strength to carry on
    And you cast your fears aside
    And you know you can survive
    So when you feel like hope is gone
    Look inside you and be strong
    And you'll finally see the truth
    That a hero lies in you
    That a hero lies in you
    That a hero lies in you.

    JONAH (thinking): WOW!!! She has a beautiful sweet singing voice.
    RUTH: Joniah may I talk to you for a moment alone?
    JONIAH: Sure Ruth.
    Now Ruth and Joniah are outside and out of earshot of Jonah, Samuel and Adam.
    RUTH: So Joniah what was that smile you were giving Jonah earlier.
    JONIAH: If I tell you will you promise not to tell Jonah.
    RUTH: I promise.
    JONIAH: The truth is that I'm in love with Jonah.
    RUTH: You're in love with him? How long have you been in love with him?
    JONIAH: Since I first seen him when you all came and rescued me from War Lord Brack.
    RUTH: You have to tell him.
    JONIAH: I know I do, Ruth, but I can't right now.
    RUTH: Why not?
    JONIAH: I'm too shy to tell him and what if he doesn't feel the same way about me.
    RUTH: Well I'm not so sure about that but I do know that he was determined to rescue you from War Lord Brack.
    JONIAH: He was?
    RUTH: Yes he was.
    JONIAH: Did he say why?
    RUTH: No he didn't.
    JONIAH: He didn't. What did he say instead?
    RUTH: Well when Samuel asked him why rescuing you was so important to him, he told us that he rather not say.
    JONIAH: Rescuing me was important to him?
    RUTH: Yes it was and it was like he wasn't going to stop until he rescued you.
    JONIAH: So Ruth, I was wondering if there was someone special in your life?
    RUTH: Now that you mention it there is.
    JONIAH: Really? Who?
    RUTH: Samuel.
    JONIAH: Samuel? Why him?
    RUTH: Well he's always there for me and I can always count on him for anything.
    JONIAH: Would you go as far and say that you're in love with him?
    RUTH: Yeah I guess you can say that I'm in love with Samuel.
    JONIAH: Does he know you are in love with him?
    RUTH: No he doesn't know.
    JONIAH: Than you should tell him before it's too late.
    RUTH: But like you, I'm too shy to tell him. By the way don't tell Jonah what I told you that rescuing you was important to him.
    JONIAH: Don't worry my lips are sealed.
    RUTH: Thank you, Joniah.
    JONIAH: You're welcome, Ruth. So Ruth, I was thinking that you should tell Samuel how you feel about him right now.
    RUTH: Now?
    JONIAH: Yes now. Is there problem with that, Ruth?
    RUTH: I just don't know if I want to tell him now.
    JONIAH: Why is that?
    RUTH: What if he doesn't feel the same way about me?
    JONIAH: I'm sure he does.
    RUTH: I hope you're right.
    A few minutes later Ruth and Joniah went back inside the Ark where the boys were.
    JONAH: What were the two of you doing outside?
    RUTH: Just talking.
    JONAH: Talking about what?
    JONIAH: Just girl stuff, you wouldn't understand, Jonah.
    JONAH: Oh ok. I believe you.
    JONIAH (whispered to Ruth): Ruth he bought it.
    RUTH (whispered to Joniah): He sure did.
    SAMUEL: Joniah can I talk to you for a moment alone?
    JONIAH: Sure Samuel.
    Now Samuel and Joniah are outside and out of earshot of Ruth, Jonah and Adam.
    SAMUEL: So Joniah I was wondering what was with that smile you gave Jonah earlier?
    JONIAH: If I tell you will you promise not to tell Jonah.
    SAMUEL: I promise.
    JONIAH: The truth is that I'm in love with Jonah.
    SAMUEL: You're in love with him? How long have you been in love with him?
    JONIAH: Since I first seen him when you all came and rescued me from War Lord Brack.
    SAMUEL: You have to tell him.
    JONIAH: I know I do, Samuel, but I can't right now.
    SAMUEL: Why not?
    JONIAH: I'm too shy to tell him and what if he doesn't feel the same way about me.
    SAMUEL: Well I'm not so sure about that but I do know that he was determined to rescue you from War Lord Brack.
    JONIAH: He was?
    SAMUEL: Yes he was.
    JONIAH: Did he say why?
    SAMUEL: No he didn't.
    JONIAH: He didn't. What did he say instead?
    SAMUEL: Well when I asked him why rescuing you was so important to him, he told us that he rather not say.
    JONIAH: Rescuing me was important to him?
    SAMUEL: Yes it was and it was like he wasn't going to stop until he rescued you.
    JONIAH: So Samuel, I was wondering if there was someone special in your life?
    SAMUEL: Now that you mention it there is.
    JONIAH: Really? Who?
    SAMUEL: Ruth.
    JONIAH: Ruth? Why her?
    SAMUEL: Well she's always there for me and I can always count on her for anything.
    JONIAH: Would you go as far and say that you're in love with her?
    SAMUEL: Yeah I guess you can say that I'm in love with Ruth.
    JONIAH: Does she know you are in love with her?
    SAMUEL: No she doesn't know.
    JONIAH: Than you should tell her before it's too late.
    SAMUEL: But like you, I'm too shy to tell her. By the way don't tell Jonah what I told you that rescuing you was important to him.
    JONIAH: Don't worry my lips are sealed.
    SAMUEL: Thank you, Joniah.
    JONIAH: You're welcome, Samuel. So Samuel, I was thinking that you should tell Ruth how you feel about her right now.
    SAMUEL: Now?
    JONIAH: Yes now. Is there problem with that, Samuel?
    SAMUEL: I just don't know if I want to tell her now.
    JONIAH: Why is that?
    SAMUEL: What if she doesn't feel the same way about me?
    JONIAH: I'm sure she does.
    SAMUEL: I hope you're right.
    A few minutes later as Samuel and Joniah were about to go back into the Ark someone came up and grabbed Joniah from behind and covered her mouth so that she couldn't scream out and Samuel never saw her get captured. When Samuel was in the Ark that's when Jonah noticed Joniah wasn't with him.
    JONAH: Where's Joniah, Samuel?
    SAMUEL: What do you mean she's right here behind me?
    Samuel turned around and noticed that she wasn't there.
    SAMUEL: Well she was right behind me.
    JONAH: Where is she now?
    RUTH: You don't think she was captured again by...
    JONAH (interuppting): Don't even say it Ruth.
    RUTH: If she was we have to rescue her again.
    JONAH: No I and I alone is going to rescue her.
    RUTH: Jonah you can't do it yourself.
    JONAH: I have to Ruth. I can't lose her again.
    SAMUEL: Why is that?
    JONAH: Well I'll be lost if I lost her again.
    A few minutes later Jonah took off in the Roamer. In the meantime Ruth and Samuel are talking about their feelings for each other.
    RUTH: Samuel, there is something that I have to tell you.
    SAMUEL: And there is something that I have to tell you, too, Ruth.
    RUTH: What's that Samuel?
    SAMUEL: Why don't you go first?
    RUTH: No you go first.
    ADAM: Why don't you say it at the same time?
    RUTH: Great idea, Adam.
    SAMUEL: On the count of three. 1, 2, 3.
    RUTH AND SAMUEL: I'm in love with you.
    RUTH: You're in love with me?
    SAMUEL: Yes I am. You're in love with me?
    RUTH: Yes I am. How long have you been in love with me?
    SAMUEL: Since I first met you. How long have you been in love with me?
    RUTH: Like you say, since I first met you.
    SAMUEL: We mustn't tell Jonah yet.
    RUTH: I agree.
    SAMUEL: And that goes for you too, Adam.
    ADAM: My lips are sealed.
    ~Meanwhile Jonah in the Ark Roamer~
    Jonah was still in the Roamer on his way to War Lord Brack's camp.
    JONAH: I can't believe I have to rescue her again from War Lord Brack. What does he want with her this time? Whatever he wants her for he is never going to take my girl away from me again. She is the most precious treasure that I have ever found.
    ~Meanwhile at War Lord Brack's Camp~
    This time War Lord Brack has Joniah tied to a post so that she couldn't escape.
    JONIAH: What do you want with me this time War Lord Brack?
    WAR LORD BRACK: I realized that you are the most precious treasure that I have ever found.
    JONIAH: Hate to burst your bubble, but like I said before I'll never be your girl.
    WAR LORD BRACK: You're going to be my girl no matter what.
    And before Joniah could say anything War Lord Brack kissed her passionately and Joniah was trying to break free but she couldn't so the only thing that she can think of was to kick War Lord Brack in the shin making War Lord Brack stop kissing her.
    WAR LORD BRACK: OWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What was that for?
    JONIAH: That was for kissing me. Never, ever do that again.
    Before War Lord Brack could say anything Jonah arrived.
    WAR LORD BRACK: I know you, you dressed up donkey.
    JONIAH: You take that back!
    JONAH: Release the girl at once, War Lord Brack.
    WAR LORD BRACK: Never! Nia's mine, Jonah.
    JONAH: Nia? Who's Nia?
    JONIAH: That's me, Jonah.
    JONAH: I thought...
    JONIAH (as she winked at Jonah): Jonah my name is Nia.
    JONAH: Why did you capture her again?
    WAR LORD BRACK: I realized that she is the most precious treasure that I have ever found and I'll never let her go again and you can't have her.
    JONIAH: Jonah help me!
    JONAH: Don't worry Nia I will.
    WAR LORD BRACK: Not this time.
    Before War Lord Brack knew it Jonah used his reflector on him and blinded him long enough to untie Joniah and escape in the Roamer before War Lord Brack realized they were gone.
    JONIAH: Thank you for rescuing me again from that creep, Jonah.
    JONAH: You're welcome.
    JONIAH: Why did you come alone?
    JONAH: I wanted to rescue you myself this time. By the way why did you tell War Lord Brack your name was Nia and Joniah?
    JONIAH: I didn't want him knowing my real name for a certain reason.
    JONAH: And what reason will that be?
    JONIAH: Uh, I rather not say right now. Well, Jonah it's official.
    JONAH: What's official?
    JONIAH: You truly are my hero.
    JONAH: Why is that?
    JONIAH: Well you have rescued me twice from War Lord Brack and that makes you a hero to me in my book. Now I hope that War Lord Brack doesn't try and capture me again for the third time.
    JONAH: Don't worry I won't let that happen.
    JONIAH: Thanks, Jonah, you are so sweet.
    A few minutes later Jonah and Joniah were back inside the Ark.
    RUTH: Joniah, you're alright.
    JONIAH: Yes I am, thanks to Jonah.
    JONAH: Let's get out of this spot so that War Lord Brack can't capture Joniah again.
    SAMUEL: I agree with you on that skipper.
    JONAH: And if somehow he does don't call Joniah by her real name in front of him.
    RUTH: Why Jonah?
    JONIAH: Jonah can I answer this one?
    JONAH: Of course you can. I'm going to be in here if you need me.
    Now Jonah is in the cockpit of the Ark and driving off.
    RUTH: So Joniah what did Jonah mean by not to call you by your real name in front of War Lord Brack?
    JONIAH: Well when War Lord Brack captured me the first time he asked me what my name was and at first I didn't want to tell him but when he asked me a second time I told him that my name was Nia.
    SAMUEL: Why didn't you want to tell War Lord Brack your name was Joniah instead?
    JONIAH: If you think about it my name sounds awfully similar to Jonah.
    RUTH: Now that you mention it, it does. By the way Joniah, Samuel and I have finally told each other our feelings for each other.
    JONIAH: You did?
    RUTH: Yes we did.
    JONIAH: And?
    RUTH: And what?
    JONIAH: What happened?
    RUTH: I found out that he was in love with me.
    SAMUEL: And I found out she was in love with me.
    JONIAH: I'm so happy for you.
    RUTH: Have you told Jonah your feelings for him?
    JONIAH: Not yet.
    SAMUEL: What do you mean not yet?
    JONIAH: I'm just not ready to tell him yet.
    RUTH: But he has rescued you twice from War Lord Brack.
    JONIAH: Yeah I know, but that isn't enough to tell him how I truly feel about him. By the way does Jonah know that you are in love with each other?
    RUTH: No he doesn't.
    JONIAH: He doesn't? Why?
    SAMUEL: We're not ready to tell him that yet.
    JONIAH: Are you going to tell him?
    RUTH: We might but...
    SAMUEL: We're not sure when we should tell him.
    Later that evening Joniah fell asleep dreaming about Jonah as Jonah was making his entry for the day.
    JONAH: Ark II Log, Entry #143: Today, I rescued the most beautiful girl that I've ever seen twice from War Lord Brack who wanted her for his girl. But I wasn't about to let him have her. Besides she is the most precious treasure that I have ever found and that treasure was stolen from me twice today. Also I've falling in love with her but she doesn't know that I am because I haven't told her yet and I don't know if she is in love with me, because she hasn't told me that she is or not.
    Later that night Jonah fell asleep dreaming about Joniah.


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    Re: 01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Wed Jan 12, 2011 8:54 pm

    Chapter 2
    Telling Jonah The Truth

    It's now 1am in the morning and Joniah was having a bad dream. She was dreaming that somehow she was never going to see Jonah again. She was also dreaming that something bad might happen to him that will make her not see him ever again. Just then she woke up screaming.
    JONIAH (screaming): Jonah!!!!!!!
    Jonah woke up and ran to Joniah's side. By the time he got there she had tears in her eyes.
    JONAH: Joniah what's wrong?
    JONIAH (as she hugs Jonah): Oh Jonah.
    JONAH (as he hugged Joniah back): What is it, Joniah?
    JONIAH: Jonah I had a horrible dream.
    JONAH: Oh. How bad was it?
    JONIAH: I dreamt that something bad happened to you that made me think that I was never going to see you again.
    JONAH: Why is that bad?
    JONIAH: I'll tell you later Jonah.
    A few minutes later Joniah went back to asleep and Jonah gave her a kiss on the forehead.
    JONAH (as he kissed her on her forehead, as he whispered): Good night and sweet dreams, my sweet angel.
    Jonah went back to bed himself not knowing that Joniah heard what he whispered to her as he kissed her on her forehead. Joniah sat up and looked over to where Jonah was sleeping.
    JONIAH (whispered to herself): I can't believe Jonah called me his sweet angel and kissed me on the forehead. Could it be that he is in love with me?
    And with that Joniah fell back asleep dreaming sweet dreams of Jonah. A few hours later when everyone was fully awake Joniah went outside and sat at the edge of a pond thinking about how much she misses her mother and how she's going to tell Jonah her feelings for him.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #169: Today my mission is to tell Joniah my feelings for her and in hopes that she feels the same way about me.
    A few minutes later Jonah joined her.
    JONAH: Joniah what are you doing?
    JONIAH: Just thinking.
    JONAH: Thinking about what?
    JONIAH: I was just thinking about how much I miss my mother.
    JONAH: When was the last time you saw her?
    JONIAH: About a month ago.
    JONAH: Where is your mother?
    JONIAH: She's at Tarrytown Airport with the rest of my family.
    JONAH: Tarrytown Airport?
    JONIAH: That's where she works as the Ace Mechanic and also that's where we live as well.
    JONAH: Your family lives at an Airport.
    JONIAH: That's right.
    JONAH: Come to think of it you never told me the name of your mother or the rest of your family?
    JONIAH: That's because you never asked.
    JONAH: So what are their names?
    JONIAH: My mother is Brenda Blue, my favorite aunt who is also my mother's twin sister is Brendaleigh. My younger sisters names are: Brooke, Emily, Gabrielle, Katarina, Nancy, Olivia and Robin. The triplets are Aaliyah, Alice and Adrienne. The quintuplets are Cecilia, Carol, Camille, Carson and Christiana. The first set of twins are Drew and Danielle. The second set of twins are Jayda and Judith. The third set of twins are Melissa and Mara. The quadruplets are Stephanie, Stella, Sarah and Shannon.
    JONAH: That's a big family. Do you have a father or any brothers?
    JONIAH: My father died 10 years ago and no I don't have any brothers.
    JONAH: Sorry about your father.
    JONIAH: That's ok, Jonah.
    JONAH: Were you close with your father?
    JONIAH: No I wasn't I was more close with my mother than I was with my father. You could say that I'm a real Mama's Girl.
    Just then Joniah can sense someone coming and it wasn't Samuel, Ruth or Adam.
    JONIAH: Uh, Jonah, I hate to say it but I think we have company.
    Jonah turned and saw someone coming towards them. As he did Joniah hid behind Jonah.
    JONAH: What do you want War Lord Brack?
    WAR LORD BRACK: The precious treasure you stole from me twice the other day.
    JONAH: I stole from you? You got that backwards you stole that precious treasure from me. Anyways you can't have her this time.
    JONIAH (thinking): Wow, Jonah really cares about me.
    WAR LORD BRACK: I don't care who stole her from whom anyway she is mine and she'll always be mine.
    JONAH: She'll never be your girl, War Lord Brack!
    JONIAH: How true that is.
    WAR LORD BRACK: You haven't seen the last of War Lord Brack. I'll be back for her just you wait.
    And with that War Lord Brack left and Joniah and Jonah never saw him from that day on.
    JONIAH: Jonah, you're not going to let him have me are you?
    JONAH: Of course not. He doesn't deserve any one as beautiful as you.
    JONIAH: You think I'm beautiful, Jonah?
    JONAH: Yes I do. You are the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
    JONIAH: Jonah, I have something that I need to tell you.
    JONAH: What's that Joniah?
    JONIAH: Well ever since I first saw when you first rescued me from War Lord Brack I (sighs) fell in love with you. Than I fell in love with you more the second time you rescue me from War Lord Brack. And now I'm in love with you even more than before when you protected me from War Lord Brack.
    JONAH: Joniah, I have something that I have to tell you.
    JONIAH: What's that Jonah?
    JONAH: I've been in love with you when I first saw you being chased by those scavengers who took you to War Lord Brack. Also I was determined to rescue you.
    JONIAH: You were determined to rescue me?
    JONAH: That's right. I must admit that rescuing you was important to me.
    JONIAH: Really? Rescuing me was important to you?
    JONAH: That's right. Not only are you the most beautiful girl that I've ever seen but you are the most precious treasure that I have ever found.
    JONIAH: So that's why you didn't want War Lord Brack to have me?
    JONAH: That's right. So Joniah what do you want me do now?
    JONIAH: I want you to kiss me now.
    Jonah just smiled and pulled Joniah close and started kissing her passionately. And at the very moment Samuel and Ruth came out of the Ark and saw Jonah and Joniah kissing.
    SAMUEL: Ruth are you seeing what I'm seeing?
    RUTH: If you're seeing Jonah and Joniah kissing than yes I do see what you're seeing.
    SAMUEL: It looks like they finally told each other their feelings for each other.
    They were walking back to the Ark and before they went back inside they looked over to where Jonah and Joniah were at and they saw them still kissing.
    SAMUEL: Are they ever going to come up for air?
    RUTH: You think they would've by now.
    A few minutes later Samuel and Ruth were inside the Ark kissing each other passionately that way they wouldn't get caught by Jonah who was still kissing Joniah passionately. A few minutes later Joniah and Jonah broke their kiss.
    JONIAH: WOW!!!! Jonah you're a great kisser.
    JONAH: So are you.
    They were still sitting at the edge of the pond just cuddling with each other.
    JONIAH: I could stay like this forever.
    JONAH: Yeah, me too.
    Later that night Joniah was sleeping in Jonah's embrace as Jonah makes his entry for the day.
    JONAH: Ark II Log, Entry #201: Today, I found out that Joniah is in love with me and I told her that I'm in love with her. Also I had to protected from War Lord Brack who still wanted her for himself again. But not this time. Joniah is now my girl. Tomorrow I'm going to surprise Joniah by taking her to see her family because she told me that she misses her family especially her mother, Brenda Blue, whom she told me was the Ace Mechanic at Tarrytown Airport.
    After he made his entry he fell asleep himself with Joniah still in his embrace.


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    Re: 01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

    Post by kittyfan on Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:10 pm

    oh wow those two chapters r really good amber i can;t wait to read the next chapter whenever u get a chance to write it and post it on here


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    Chapter 3
    Family Reunion

    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #76: Our mission is to reunite Joniah with her family. She told me that she hasn't seen them for a month or so.
    Jonah approached Joniah with a blindfold.
    JONAH: Joniah, I would like you to wear this blindfold for awhile.
    JONIAH: Why Jonah?
    JONAH: Well I have a surprise for you and I don't want you to see the surprise before I'm ready to show it to you.
    JONIAH: Ok, Jonah.
    So Jonah helped Joniah put the blindfold on.
    JONAH: Can you see?
    JONIAH: No I can't.
    JONAH: Good. Now keep it on until I tell you to take it off.
    JONIAH: But, Jonah...?
    JONAH: That's in order.
    JONIAH: Yes sir.
    A few minutes later Jonah took the wheel of the Ark and drove off. Ruth was with Jonah.
    RUTH: So Jonah where are we going and why did you want Joniah to where that blindfold?
    JONAH: We are going to Tarrytown Airport.
    RUTH: Why are we going there?
    JONAH: That's where Joniah's family lives.
    RUTH: Does she know that you are taking her to see her family?
    JONAH: No she doesn't know.
    RUTH: Is that what the blindfold is for?
    JONAH: That's right.
    A few hours went by and now the Ark II is driving into Tarrytown Airport. All the planes and Joniah's family is wondering what they are seeing. Just then Jonah got out of the Ark and asked for Brenda Blue.
    JONAH: Where may I find Brenda Blue?
    Brenda Blue stepped forward.
    BRENDA: I'm Brenda Blue. Who are you?
    JONAH: I'm Jonah.
    BRENDA: What is this?
    JONAH: This is the Ark II and I'm the Commander of the Ark II. By the way are you the mother to Joniah Blue.
    BRENDA: Yes she is my oldest daughter and I haven't seen her for a month.
    JONAH: Yes I know. I can see where Joniah got her beautiful looks from.
    BRENDA: How do you know, Jonah?
    JONAH: She told me herself.
    BRENDA: She told you? When?
    JONAH: Yes she did. Yesterday she told me that she misses her family especially you, Brenda.
    BRENDA: Do you know where she is right now?
    JONAH: Yes I do.
    BRENDA: Where is she, Jonah?
    JONAH (as he points to the Ark): She's right in there.
    Brenda was going to go in there but Jonah stopped her.
    JONAH: You can't go in there.
    BRENDA: Why can't I?
    JONAH: Your daughter doesn't know that we are here.
    BRENDA: She doesn't know?
    JONAH: No she doesn't. In fact at this moment she is still sitting in there waiting for me to tell her that she can take her blindfold off.
    BRENDA: Jonah please go get her and bring her out here.
    JONAH: I will if you all don't make a noise when I bring her out here before I tell her to take off her blindfold.
    BRENDA: We won't, I promise.
    So Jonah went back inside the Ark and took Joniah by the hand.
    JONIAH: Jonah is that you?
    JONAH: Yes it's me.
    JONIAH: Where are we?
    JONAH: You'll see soon enough.
    Jonah than lead Joniah out of the Ark with Samuel, Ruth and Adam and put her right in front of her mother so when she takes her blindfold off her mother is the first one that she'll see.
    JONAH: Joniah.
    JONIAH: Yes, Commander.
    JONAH: You can take your blindfold off.
    So Joniah took off her blindfold and when she saw who she was standing in front of she couldn't believe her eyes.
    JONIAH (as she hugged her mother): Mother! I've missed you so much!
    BRENDA (as she hugged her daughter back): I've missed you too, baby girl.
    Brenda and Joniah were still hugging each other passionately.
    SAMUEL: It looks like someone missed their mother.
    A few minutes later Joniah stopped hugging her mother and went over to Jonah and gave him a passionate hug and a very passionate kiss.
    JONIAH (as she gave him a passionate hug and a very passionate kiss): Thank you, Jonah.
    A few minutes later Jonah and Joniah where in Brenda Blue's workshop with Brenda after Jonah introduced her to his friends, Samuel, Ruth and Adam.
    BRENDA: Baby girl, please tell me why did you kiss your Commander?
    Joniah looked at Jonah and he nodded his head.
    JONIAH: Well mother the reason why is because Jonah and I are in love with each other.
    BRENDA: When did you fall in love with him?
    JONIAH: Two days ago when he rescued me twice from War Lord Brack and yesterday when he protected me from War Lord Brack.
    BRENDA: Well than, I thank you, Jonah for rescuing my daughter.
    JONAH: You're welcome, Brenda.
    A few minutes later Joniah introduced Jonah, Ruth, Samuel and Adam to the rest of her family and her friends.
    JONAH: Joniah can I see the rest of Tarrytown?
    JONIAH: Of course you can Jonah. Let me just tell my mother.
    So Joniah went to go tell her mother.
    JONIAH: Mother, I'm going to show Jonah around Tarrytown.
    BRENDA: Oh ok. Have fun, baby girl.
    JONIAH: I will, mother. Bye.
    BRENDA: Bye, baby girl.
    Now Joniah and Jonah are at Tarrytown Square.
    JONAH: Where are we now, starshine?
    JONIAH: Where at...wait what did you call me?
    JONAH: I called you starshine.
    JONIAH: I love it.
    JONAH: So where are we?
    JONIAH: Where at Tarrytown Square.
    JONAH: So what's here in Tarrytown Square?
    JONIAH: There's Tarrytown Public Library, Andy's Donut Shop, Curt's Hardware, a Fire Station, a school called the Michael O'Tarry school and a Bank.
    A few minutes later Jonah and Joniah were now in Tarrytown National Park.
    JONAH: Now where are we, starshine?
    JONIAH: Where are Tarrytown National Park?
    JONAH: Why doesn't it look like the rest of the world?
    JONIAH: Well since this is a small town it was overlooked and no one but my family have been here and we kept it looking like this for hundreds of years.
    JONAH: Did you say hundreds of years?
    JONIAH: Yes I did. Why?
    JONAH: You don't look that old?
    JONIAH: Jonah, I'm only 27 years old. I was talking about my ancestors who lived here before me.
    JONAH: Where are your ancestors now?
    JONIAH: I'm afraid they all died a long time ago.
    JONAH: Oh I see.
    Now Joniah took Jonah to her favorite part of Tarrytown National Park where she likes to spend time with her mother.
    JONIAH: Now Jonah this is my favorite part of Tarrytown National Park where I love to spend some time with my mother.
    JONAH: What is this place?
    JONIAH: Well take a look for yourself.
    JONAH: I don't see anything.
    JONIAH: Jonah look over there at the flowers and tell me what you see?
    JONAH: Is that a smiling face I see in the flowers?
    JONIAH: Yes it is.
    JONAH: Why do the flowers make a smiling face?
    JONIAH: Why my dear Jonah we are in Smiling Meadow hence the smiling face the flowers are making.
    JONAH: This is called Smiling Meadow?
    JONIAH: Yes it is and it is my mother's and my favorite place to spend time alone together. You know you can see Smiling Meadow from the sky a little better.
    JONAH: Really?
    JONIAH: Really, really.
    JONAH: Now if only I had my Jet Jumper, I can fly up and see it better.
    JONIAH (as she pointed behind Jonah and made his Jet Jumper appeared): You mean that Jet Jumper behind you Jonah?
    Jonah looked behind him and sure enough there was his Jet Jumper.
    JONAH: Where did this coming from? This wasn't here before.
    JONIAH: I'll explain later, Jonah.
    Jonah strapped on the Jet Jumper and flew up and saw Smiling Meadow from the sky. A few minutes later he came back down.
    JONAH: You were right Smiling Meadow did look better from the sky. Have you seen Smiling Meadow from the sky?
    JONIAH: Yes I have.
    JONAH: Did one of your plane friends or a Jet Jumper help you?
    JONIAH: No.
    JONAH: No? Than how did you see it from the sky without a Jet Jumper like mine or without one of your plane friends to help you?
    JONIAH: I'll explain later.
    Jonah and Joniah stayed at Smiling Meadow awhile longer. They were lying down on the ground looking up at the sky. Than before Joniah knew it Jonah was on top of her kissing her passionately. A few minutes later Joniah showed Jonah Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONIAH: This is Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONAH: Why is it called that?
    JONIAH: Well you'll have to be here at night to know why it's called Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONAH: Can we come back tonight?
    JONIAH: Of course.
    Later that evening when it was dark enough for the Lightning Bugs to come out, Jonah had his eyes close and Joniah lead him to Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONAH: Can I open my eyes now?
    JONIAH: Not yet.
    Now Joniah and Jonah were back at Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONAH: Now can I open my eyes?
    JONIAH: You may open your eyes now my gorgeous Commander and look at the lake.
    So Jonah opened his eyes and looked at the lake.
    JONAH: What are those lights flying around above the lake, starshine?
    JONIAH: Those are the lightning bugs of Lightning Bug Lake.
    JONAH: Are they the reason it's called Lightning Bug Lake?
    JONIAH: Yes they are.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #53: Today I got to meet Joniah's family and I now know where she gets her beautiful looks from and that is from her beautiful mother, Brenda Blue. Her home Tarrytown has a meadow that can smile called Smiling Meadow, a lake the glows with lightning bugs called Lightning Bug Lake. An airport with planes that can talk.
    Later that night Joniah was sleeping in Jonah's embrace as he was making his entry and soon after he finished he fell asleep himself with Joniah still in his embrace.

    This is my 1600th post.


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    Re: 01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Sat Jan 15, 2011 7:25 am

    Wow those were great chapters. The parts that I liked it chapter 1 were when Jonah rescued Joniah. I liked when Joniah was singing in chapter 1. The parts that I liked in chapter 2 where when Joniah woke up for a nightmare screaming Jonah's name than he comforted her. I liked when he kissed on the forehead and said Good night and sweet dreams, my sweet angel. The parts in chapter 3 that I liked was when Jonah took Joniah to see her family. I liked when she showed him around Tarrytown.


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    Re: 01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

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    ♥Cutealicious83♥ wrote:Wow those were great chapters. The parts that I liked it chapter 1 were when Jonah rescued Joniah. I liked when Joniah was singing in chapter 1. The parts that I liked in chapter 2 where when Joniah woke up for a nightmare screaming Jonah's name than he comforted her. I liked when he kissed on the forehead and said Good night and sweet dreams, my sweet angel. The parts in chapter 3 that I liked was when Jonah took Joniah to see her family. I liked when she showed him around Tarrytown.

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    Post by kittyfan on Sat Jan 15, 2011 6:50 pm

    i like chapter 3 amber can;t wait to read chapter 4 whenever u get a chance to write it and post it on here


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    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:06 am

    Chapter 4
    Jonah Finding Out About Samuel and Ruth

    The next day Joniah, Jonah, Ruth, Samuel and Adam said good-bye to Joniah's family and her plane friends.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #21: Today we are leaving Tarrytown Airport and although it's a bittersweet good-bye for Joniah and her mother, but in time Joniah and I will return someday.
    JONIAH: Mother, we have to go now.
    BRENDA: Do you have to go now?
    JONIAH: Yes we do. But I promise I'll return someday, mother.
    BRENDA: Alright, I'll miss you until you return.
    JONIAH: I'm going to miss you too. Bye mother.
    BRENDA: Bye, baby girl.
    Joniah said good-bye to the rest of her family and her plane friends. A few minutes later Joniah, Jonah and his friends were back aboard the Ark. Jonah took the wheel of the Ark and Joniah was with him. While Jonah was driving the Ark out of Tarrytown and back to the area where they first encounter Joniah when she was being chased by scavengers who worked for War Lord Brack, Samuel and Ruth took the advantage of being alone without Jonah and were kissing each other passionately. A few minutes later Ruth and Samuel broke their kiss.
    RUTH: Sam when are we going to tell Jonah? We can't keep us a secret from Jonah forever?
    SAMUEL: I don't know Ruth. Yes I know that we can't keep us a secret from Jonah forever. He'll find out somehow.
    RUTH: Until then we have to be careful when Jonah is around.
    ~Meanwhile with Jonah and Joniah~
    JONAH: Starshine is there something going on between Ruth and Samuel?
    JONIAH: No. What makes you say that, Jonah?
    JONAH: I've noticed the way they look at each other. It's the same way you and I look at each other.
    JONIAH: I don't know what you're talking about Jonah.
    JONAH: Joniah do you know something that I don't?
    JONIAH: No.
    JONAH: Joniah are you lying to me? You're not keeping any secrets from me are you?
    JONIAH: No not at all.
    JONAH: Alright I believe you.
    JONIAH (thinking): Oh my god, he brought it. Ruth and Samuel will kill me if I told Jonah about them.
    JONAH (as he looked over at Joniah and noticed that she is thinking about something): What are you thinking about starshine?
    JONIAH: I was just thinking about you.
    JONAH: Are you sure, starshine?
    JONIAH: Of course I'm sure, my gorgeous Commander.
    A few hours later they had arrived where they first saw Joniah being chased by those scavengers who chased her, captured and brought her to War Lord Brack. Joniah went to Ruth and Samuel.
    JONIAH: Guys, I have to talk to you for a moment alone.
    RUTH: Ok, Joniah.
    Now Joniah, Ruth and Samuel are out of earshot of Jonah.
    SAMUEL: So what did you want to talk to us about?
    JONIAH: I don't know how to put this but I think Jonah knows about the two of you.
    RUTH: Did you tell him?
    JONIAH: No I didn't.
    SAMUEL: Than how does he know about us?
    JONIAH: Well when we left Tarrytown and were on our way back here Jonah was asking me if there was something going on between the two of you.
    RUTH: What did you say?
    JONIAH: I said 'No. What makes you say that Jonah?' Then he said, 'I've noticed the way they look at each other. It's the same way you and I look at each other.'
    SAMUEL: Than what did you say?
    JONIAH: I told him that I didn't know what he was talking about. He then asked me if I knew something that he didn't know or if I was lying to him. I told him that I wasn't lying to him.
    RUTH: Did he believe you?
    JONIAH: Believe it or not he did believe me.
    RUTH: Samuel and I have been thinking about telling Jonah.
    JONIAH: When?
    SAMUEL: We're not so sure yet.
    A few minutes later Joniah went back into the Ark to be with Jonah but when she got in there Jonah was no where insight.
    JONIAH: Adam where's Jonah?
    ADAM: Jonah left.
    JONIAH: When did he leave?
    ADAM: Five minutes ago.
    JONIAH: Where did he go?
    ADAM: He didn't say?
    JONIAH: You mean you don't know where Jonah's at?
    Adam shook his head no. Joniah gasps and ran out to where Ruth and Samuel are at.
    JONIAH: Ruth! Samuel!
    RUTH: What is it?
    JONIAH: We have a problem.
    SAMUEL: What's the problem?
    JONIAH: Well when I went back inside to be with Jonah I noticed that he wasn't there and so I asked Adam and he told me that Jonah left about five minutes ago.
    SAMUEL: Did Adam tell you where Jonah went?
    JONIAH: No! That's the problem!
    Joniah started to get tears in her eyes.
    RUTH: That's not like Jonah to take off and not tell us where he is going.
    SAMUEL: Let's get the Roamer and search for him.
    RUTH: Great idea, Sam.
    So Ruth, Samuel, Joniah and Adam got in the Roamer and after Samuel secured the Ark they took off in the Roamer looking for Jonah.
    SAMUEL: Adam did you happen to see which way Jonah went?
    ADAM (as he pointed in the direction Jonah went): He went that way.
    So Ruth drove off in the direction Adam pointed to where Jonah went.
    JONIAH: I hope nothing has happened to him.
    RUTH: I'm sure he's fine Joniah.
    SAMUEL: Don't worry we're get Jonah back.
    JONIAH: I hope so. I can't live without him.
    Just then Joniah broke out into song and sang "Without You" by Mariah Carey.
    JONIAH (singing): No I can't forget this evening
    Or your face as you were leaving
    But I guess that's just the way
    The story goes
    You always smile but in your eyes
    Your sorrow shows
    Yes it shows
    No I can't forget tomorrow
    When I think of all my sorrow
    When I had you there
    But then I let you go
    And now it's only fair
    That I should let you know
    What you should know

    I can't live
    If living is without you
    I can't live
    I can't give anymore
    I can't live
    If living is without you
    I can't give
    I can't give anymore

    Well I can't forget this evening
    Or your face as you were leaving
    But I guess that's just the way
    The story goes
    You always smile but in your eyes
    Your sorrow shows
    Yes it shows

    I can't live
    If living is without you
    I can't live
    I can't give anymore
    I can't live
    If living is without you
    I can't live
    I can't give anymore

    (No, I can't live)
    (No, I can't live)
    Nooo I
    No no no no I
    I can't live
    (No, I can't live)
    If living is without you

    (No, I can't live)
    I can't live
    I can't give anymore
    I can't live
    (No, I can't live).

    Soon after Joniah sang that song she spotted Jonah.
    JONIAH: Ruth stop the Roamer!
    RUTH: Why?
    JONIAH: I just spotted Jonah!
    RUTH: Where?
    JONIAH: He's over there.
    RUTH: I see him.
    Ruth stopped the Roamer and Joniah got out and ran over to where Jonah was sitting.
    JONIAH: Jonah what are you doing out here?
    JONAH: I just needed time to think.
    JONIAH: Think about what, Jonah?
    JONAH: I rather not say right now.
    JONIAH: Oh ok. Jonah don't ever take off like that again.
    JONAH: Why is that starshine?
    JONIAH: You gave me quite a scare.
    JONAH: I'm sorry, starshine. I promise it won't happen again.
    Just than Ruth and Samuel came over to Joniah and Jonah. Jonah than noticed Ruth and Samuel holding hands with each other.
    JONAH: Tell me why are you two holding hands?
    Ruth looked at Samuel and Samuel looked at Ruth and they nodded their heads at each other.
    RUTH: Jonah, I think it's about time you found out the truth about us.
    JONAH: The truth about you? What on earth are you talking about?
    SAMUEL: Well Jonah the truth is Ruth and I are in love with each other.
    JONAH: In love with each other? Joniah did you know about this?
    JONIAH: Uh, I'm afraid so Jonah.
    JONAH: And you kept this a secret from me, even when I asked you if there was something going on between them?
    JONIAH: Yes. I'm sorry Jonah but they made me promise to keep it a secret and they wanted to tell you themselves.
    JONAH: How long have you two been in love with each other?
    RUTH: Since we first met each other.
    JONAH: That was a long time ago. Did you tell each other right away?
    SAMUEL: No we didn't.
    JONAH: So when did you tell each other?
    RUTH: The day we met Joniah after you rescued her the second time from War Lord Brack.
    JONAH: Why didn't you tell me sooner?
    RUTH: We were afraid of what you might say or do.
    JONAH: Well I'm happy for the two of you. I always knew you two would make a great couple.
    SAMUEL: Do you really think so Jonah?
    JONAH: Yes I do.
    RUTH AND SAMUEL: Thanks Jonah.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #365: Today I found out that Ruth and Samuel are in love with each other. I always knew that they were in love with each other by the way they were always looking at each other. That's how Joniah and I always look at each other.
    Later that night Ruth and Samuel were sleeping in each other's embrace. Joniah was sleeping in Jonah's embrace.


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    That was a great chapter. I liked the part where they were leaving Tarrytown Airport and Joniah said goodbye to her mother. I liked when Jonah asked Joniah if there was something go on between Ruth and Samuel. I also liked when Joniah, Samuel and Ruth came back from inside to find that Jonah was missing. I really liked when they asked Adam where Jonah but he didn't know. I liked when Joniah say Without You by Mariah Carey and when they found Jonah. I liked when Samuel and Ruth told Jonah about being in love with each other.


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    wow that was a really good chapter amber can;t wait to read the next chapter when ever u get the chance to write it and post it on here


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    Chapter 5
    Jonah's Wonder Woman

    Jonah's driving the Ark Roamer to a village where men and woman are treated as slaves.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #1457: Today our mission is to investigate a village where people are treated as slaves.
    Soon Jonah approaches the village and gets out of the Ark Roamer. Samuel, Ruth and Joniah were expecting a report back from Jonah but they got nothing. Soon Joniah had what seem to be a massive headache but it wasn't a headache at all. She sensed that Jonah was in trouble.
    RUTH: Joniah, what's wrong?
    JONIAH: Jonah's in trouble!
    RUTH: How do you know that?
    JONIAH: I sensed it.
    SAMUEL: How can you do that?
    JONIAH: You see Jonah and I have this special bond and we can sense when the other is in trouble.
    SAMUEL: Our sensors say that Jonah is somewhere in Area 64.
    RUTH: We have to go rescue him.
    JONIAH: No! I have to go rescue him myself.
    SAMUEL: You can't do it alone.
    JONIAH: I can too. Besides Jonah came to rescue me from War Lord Brack by himself and now it's time for me to return the favor.
    RUTH: I still think that we should come with you.
    JONIAH: No, Ruth, I have to do this myself.
    RUTH: Are you sure you can handle it?
    JONIAH: I can take care of it myself. Now I want the three of you to stay here until Jonah and I return. If however, I'm not back with Jonah in three hours than come get us.
    RUTH AND SAMUEL: But...
    JONIAH: That's in order!
    SAMUEL: You can't give us orders.
    RUTH: Actually she can Samuel.
    SAMUEL: What do you mean?
    RUTH: Remember when Jonah left earlier he told Joniah that she was in charge. After all she is the Commander's girl.
    JONIAH: How true that is. Now remember come get Jonah and I in three hours. Nor sooner or later than three hours.
    RUTH: Of course we understand.
    SAMUEL: How are you going to get to where Jonah's at?
    RUTH: That's right Jonah has the Roamer.
    JONIAH: Anyways if he didn't I couldn't take the Roamer.
    RUTH: Why?
    JONIAH: I can't drive.
    RUTH: And I know Jonah wouldn't like it if you took the Jet Jumper.
    JONIAH: How true that is.
    RUTH: So how are you going to get there?
    JONIAH: Oh, I have my own mode of transportation.
    A few minutes later Joniah walked out of Ark II and as soon as she was out of the Ark she looked around making sure no one was around and also making sure that Ruth, Samuel and Adam can't see her.
    JONIAH: I know Jonah is going to expect me to arrive to rescue him but what he doesn't know is that he is going to get a visit from Wonder Woman.
    When she knew the coast was clear she spun around and turned into Wonder Woman. After she turned into Wonder Woman she transported herself to Area 64 where Jonah was caught spying on them. She than looked down on the ground and saw where Jonah was at before getting captured.
    WONDER WOMAN (as she rubs her hand on the ground): Jonah was here.
    Just then she looked up and saw the village where people are kept as slaves.
    WONDER WOMAN: That must be the village where those people are being treated as slaves and there's Jonah.
    Before Wonder Woman knew it there were a couple of men coming up behind her, but she quickly turned around. One the men was named Cyrus.
    CYRUS: You are coming with me.
    WONDER WOMAN: If you can catch me.
    Before the men knew it Wonder Woman jumped over them.
    WONDER WOMAN: I'm over here boys.
    The men turned around and they were about to hit Wonder Woman but she ducked out of the way. They continue to hit her but she continues to duck and move out of the way.
    CYRUS: Would you hold still?
    Than before they knew it Wonder Woman picked one of them up and threw him and sent him flying and with that the men got scared and ran away.
    WONDER WOMAN (as she got her lasso out and was swinging it over her head and then threw it at the men): Oh no you don't!
    After Wonder Woman caught the two men with her lasso she pulled them closer to her.
    WONDER WOMAN: Ok, now you have to tell me the truth.
    CYRUS: Why should we?
    WONDER WOMAN: Well when one is bound with the golden lasso one must tell the truth. Now tell me who is your leader that is keeping these poor people as slaves?
    CYRUS: Baron Vargas.
    WONDER WOMAN: What is this Baron Vargas like?
    CYRUS: He has magical powers.
    WONDER WOMAN: Magical powers? What kind of magical powers?
    CYRUS: When a slave disobeys Baron Vargas he turns that slave into an animal.
    WONDER WOMAN: Thank you. I have what I need. Now when I release you, you will forget everything that we talked about and you will forget you saw me.
    Wonder Woman took off her lasso from the two men. A few minutes later the two men left and Wonder Woman turned back around and was looking at where Jonah was. She then did her superjump and landed right beside Jonah. Jonah was startled by Wonder Woman's appearance.
    JONAH: Who are you?
    WONDER WOMAN: I'm Wonder Woman.
    JONAH: What are you doing here Wonder Woman?
    WONDER WOMAN: I'm here to rescue you and the rest of the slaves.
    JONAH: No offense, Wonder Woman but I was expecting my girl, Joniah to come and rescue me. I surely wasn't expecting you.
    WONDER WOMAN: Oh none taken. Besides Joniah asked me to come rescue you for her, myself.
    JONAH: Joniah asked you to rescue me, yourself?
    WONDER WOMAN: Yes she did. By the way Jonah where is this Baron Vargas?
    JONAH (as he saw Baron Vargas coming towards him): Don't look now but he's coming this way. Wonder Woman you better get out of here before he catches you.
    WONDER WOMAN (as she is standing perfectly still making sure that Baron Vargas doesn't see her only Jonah can see her): Don't worry Jonah he can't see me right now. Only you can see me, but right now get back to work before Baron Vargas knows what you're doing.
    JONAH: But...
    WONDER WOMAN: Jonah stop talking to me.
    Just then Baron Vargas came over to Jonah on his horse and was right in front of Wonder Woman and was looking at Jonah.
    BARON VARGAS: Who are you talking to?
    JONAH: Me, talking? I wasn't talking to anyone at all.
    BARON VARGAS: Alright I believe you.
    A few minutes later Baron Vargas rode off and Jonah told Wonder Woman that it was safe.
    WONDER WOMAN: Jonah you won't believe this but Baron Vargas has some magical powers.
    JONAH: What kind of powers?
    WONDER WOMAN: He turns a slave who disobeys him into an animal.
    JONAH: You can't be serious Wonder Woman?
    OLD SLAVE: I'm afraid Wonder Woman is correct. I've seen it been done. He has even turned Gideon's sister into a rabbit.
    JONAH: I would like to see his magic.
    WONDER WOMAN: You're not going to challenge him are you Jonah?
    JONAH: Why yes I am Wonder Woman? Why do you ask?
    WONDER WOMAN: Well it's just that your girl won't forgive me if I let anything happen to you.
    JONAH: Why is that Wonder Woman?
    WONDER WOMAN: Joniah sent me here to protect you Jonah and that is what I'm going to do. When will be the best time to see Baron Vargas' magic?
    OLD SLAVE: At the next feeding.
    JONAH: That's great. Spread the word to the other slaves.
    WONDER WOMAN: Jonah you're not going to challenge him.
    JONAH: Why not?
    WONDER WOMAN: I won't allow it.
    JONAH: Why?
    WONDER WOMAN: Again I was sent here by your girl to protect you.
    Now it was time for the slaves' feeding.
    WONDER WOMAN: Jonah call Baron Vargas out.
    JONAH: Why don't you call him out Wonder Woman?
    WONDER WOMAN: He doesn't know my voice.
    JONAH: When do you want me to call him out?
    WONDER WOMAN: As soon as I'm on that platform.
    JONAH: Uh, Wonder Woman the stairs are over there.
    WONDER WOMAN: I know Jonah but I don't need to use the stairs.
    JONAH: What do you mean?
    WONDER WOMAN: You'll see Jonah.
    And before Jonah knew it Wonder Woman did her superjump and jumped up on to the platform and when she was in place she looked over at Jonah and nodded her head.
    JONAH (calling out): Baron Vargas! Baron Vargas! Come out, your slaves want to talk to you!
    Before they knew it Baron Vargas appears.
    BARON VARGAS: Who dares call me out?
    JONAH: Jonah dares!
    BARON VARGAS: So Jonah are you going to come up here and challenge me?
    JONAH: No, I'm not!
    BARON VARGAS: If you're not than who will?
    WONDER WOMAN: I will, Baron Vargas.
    BARON VARGAS (as he turned to see Wonder Woman standing on his platform): Who are you?
    WONDER WOMAN (as she's standing with her hands on her hips): Who am I? I'm your worst nightmare. I'm Wonder Woman.
    BARON VARGAS: Step forward, Wonder Woman and let me turn you into a bird, you'll be like a chicken in a cloop in no time.
    So Wonder Woman stepped forward right where Baron Vargas wanted her to stand. Before anyone knew it Baron Vargas performed some magic and there was smoke and after the smoke was gone there on the platform was a chicken who everyone thought was Wonder Woman.
    BARON VARGAS (as he picked up the chicken whom he thought was Wonder Woman): Wonder Woman isn't so wonderful now is she?
    Just then Wonder Woman appeared floating above the platform.
    WONDER WOMAN: Oh, Baron Vargas, missed me.
    BARON VARGAS: What how can this be? I turned you into this chicken right here!
    WONDER WOMAN: No you just thought you did.
    Baron Vargas was going to hit Wonder Woman.
    JONAH: Wonder Woman look out.
    Wonder Woman ducked out of the way when Baron Vargas went to hit her.
    JONAH: Wonder Woman do be careful.
    WONDER WOMAN: Jonah I can (as she blocks another hit from Baron Vargas) take care of myself.
    Before Baron Vargas or anyone else knew it Wonder Woman sent Baron Vargas flying. A few minutes later Baron Vargas returned and was pointing a gun at Wonder Woman.
    WONDER WOMAN: You really don't want to do that. Trust me.
    Baron Vargas fired the gun but Wonder Woman blocked the bullets with her bracelets one by one. Wonder Woman did her superjump and jumped in front of Baron Vargas and took his gun out of his hand and using her superstrengh she bent the gun in half and threw it on the ground. Baron Vargas was about to run away but Wonder Woman got out her lasso and threw it at him.
    WONDER WOMAN (as she got her lasso out and was swinging it over her head and then threw it at Baron Vargas): Oh no you don't!
    After Wonder Woman caught Baron Vargas with her lasso she pulled him closer to her.
    WONDER WOMAN: Ok, now you have to tell me the truth.
    BARON VARGAS: Why should I?
    WONDER WOMAN: Well when one is bound with the golden lasso one must tell the truth. Now tell me where are the other slaves that you sent away?
    BARON VARGAS: In a scavenger camp down the river.
    WONDER WOMAN: That's all I needed to know. Now when I release you, you will forget everything we talked about and you will forget that you ever had magical powers Also you'll forget you ever met me.
    Now Wonder Woman took her lasso off of Baron Vargas and Cyrus took him away. Just then the slaves were going to go to where Baron Vargas said where they were, but Wonder Woman stopped them.
    WONDER WOMAN: Hold it! We'll get them back! I promise. But right now you are all free men and woman.
    All the slaves cheered and was thanking Wonder Woman. Wonder Woman jumped off of the platform.
    JONAH: Wonder Woman how can I ever thank you?
    WONDER WOMAN: Oh Jonah there's no need too.
    And when Jonah wasn't looking Wonder Woman snuck off.
    JONAH: Hey, Wonder Wo...man...! Where did she go?
    GIDEON: What's that over there?
    Jonah looked over to where Gideon was pointed at.
    JONAH: It's a note. A note from Wonder Woman.
    GIDEON: What does it say?
    JONAH: It says that I have to get back to the Ark and to my girl Joniah who misses me. Bye everyone.
    THE FREE SLAVES: Bye, Jonah.
    ~Meanwhile back at the Ark, Wonder Woman changed back into Joniah~
    Joniah went back into the Ark.
    RUTH: Joniah you're back.
    SAMUEL: Where's Jonah?
    JONIAH: Oh, he's on he's way back here.
    RUTH: I thought that the two of you will come here at the same time.
    JONIAH: Well the truth is Jonah never saw me.
    SAMUEL: Than if Jonah never saw you how do you know that he is on his way back here?
    JONIAH: Oh well my friend Wonder Woman told me. Because she was the one that went to rescue him. Now if Jonah asks I never left the Ark.
    RUTH: But you did leave the Ark.
    JONIAH: Well yeah I did but Jonah can't know that because he would question why I didn't rescue him and why Wonder Woman rescue him instead. Also if Jonah tells you that he was rescued by Wonder Woman don't let him know that you know that Wonder Woman rescued him.
    Joniah saw Jonah coming and so she quickly lied down on the couch in the Ark and told Ruth and Samuel if Jonah asks to tell him that she is sleeping.
    JONIAH: If Jonah asks tell him that I've been sleeping for awhile.
    As soon as Joniah fell asleep Jonah walked in.
    RUTH AND SAMUEL: Jonah, you're alright.
    JONAH: Yes I am thanks to Wonder Woman.
    RUTH: Wonder Woman?
    JONAH: Yes Wonder Woman. You have got to meet her.
    SAMUEL: What is Wonder Woman like?
    JONAH: She can stop bullets cold. She can jump really high. She also has superstrength and other powers that you have to see for yourself. Also she is very beautiful. By the way where is Joniah?
    RUTH: She's over there sleeping.
    JONAH: Has she been sleeping the whole time I was gone?
    RUTH: Well not the whole time because she was the one that told us you were in trouble. After awhile she was getting worry about you so that is why she fell asleep.
    Jonah went over to her and sat down next to her.
    JONAH (as he gently touches her): Starshine, wake up.
    Joniah slowly began to open her eyes. When she saw Jonah she was so happy.
    JONIAH (as she hugged Jonah): Oh, Jonah thank god you're alright. I was so worried about you.
    JONAH: Of course I'm alright. Thanks to Wonder Woman.
    JONIAH: Wonder Woman?
    JONAH: Of course. She told me that you sent her to rescue and protect me.
    JONIAH: That's right I forgot. I was so worried I forgot I sent her to rescue you.
    JONAH: Why did you send Wonder Woman to rescue me? Why didn't you come and rescue me yourself, starshine?
    JONIAH: I asked Wonder Woman to because well you saw what she can do right Jonah?
    JONAH: Yes I did.
    JONIAH: And from what you saw that's why I sent her.
    JONAH: Do you think that we will see Wonder Woman again?
    JONIAH: Why do you ask, Jonah?
    JONAH: Well when I was going to ask Wonder Woman if she wanted to come and meet my friends she was gone.
    JONIAH: Well that's Wonder Woman.
    JONAH: So do you think that we can meet Wonder Woman again?
    JONIAH: Well I guess you just have to wait and see if she'll return or not.
    RUTH: Joniah.
    JONIAH: Yes, Ruth.
    RUTH: Jonah thinks Wonder Woman is so very beautiful.
    JONIAH: Oh he does, does he?
    JONAH: Yes I confess, starshine, Wonder Woman is so very beautiful, but you're more beautiful than Wonder Woman.
    And with that Joniah gave Jonah a very passionate kiss. A few minutes later Joniah broke the kiss.
    JONAH: What was that for?
    JONIAH: For what you said about me being more beautiful than Wonder Woman.
    JONAH'S VOICE: Ark II Log, Entry #1447: Today I was captured by Baron Vargas and was treated as a slave but soon after I was captured I got a visit from Wonder Woman who rescued me and the rest of the slaves from Baron Vargas. I hope to see Wonder Woman again. She'll be a great addition to our crew.
    Later that night Ruth and Samuel are sleeping in each other's embrace. Joniah was sleeping in Jonah's embrace.


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    Re: 01 Stolen Treasure (my 1st Ark II story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:16 am

    That was a good chapter. I liked when Wonder Woman came to rescue Jonah. I also liked when Wonder Woman challenged Baron Vargas. I liked when Jonah got back than told Ruth and Samuel about Wonder Woman being beautiful. I also liked when they told Joniah that Jonah about Wonder Woman being beautiful. I really liked when Jonah told Joniah that she was more beautiful than Wonder Woman and I love the ending.


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    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Wed Jan 19, 2011 1:33 am

    Thank you. I had a feeling that you'll like those parts.


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    i like it too amber and that chapter was really good too can;t wait to read more


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