All Together Now

    Is it love, or destiny?

    Share
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:40 pm

    Main Characters
    Allysa-
    Young girl who stumbles into a strange looking boy. After this happens, she hurries home to her brother and sister, but can't seem to tell them what happened.

    Kadyn-
    Allysa's older brother. He is pretty close to her, but never knew everything in her life.

    Shayla-
    Allysa's giggly older sister. She always knew everything about her until the day she came home with a huge secret.

    Moe-
    Runs into a young girl on the streets. Sees something different about her, but can't put his finger on it. he's a Doodlebop in hiding (get it!).

    DeeDee-
    Moe's older sister. She laughs at Moe's theory about the young girl.

    Rooney-
    Moe's older brother. Looks into Moe's theory. He finds the girl eventually.


    If you want a part in the story, let me know.
    avatar
    The.Bitch.Shayla

    Number of posts : 504
    Age : 24
    Location : Dancing ON The Roof of Doodlebop central
    Registration date : 2009-02-25

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by The.Bitch.Shayla on Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:51 pm

    haha awesome stuff! cant wait to read it!
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Chapter One

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:40 pm

    Chapter One: The Meeting

    A girl and a boy are seen running down a sidewalk.

    "I've got to get home! Oh, Momma's gonna kill me if I'm not home before she is!"

    "No one can see my face. I've got to get back to Dee and Roon now."
    The two run into each other. Orange dust comes off the young boy.

    "Oh, I'm so sorry, sir. I'm just trying.... to...get...." the girl began.

    "Home? Me too. My brother and sister will worry for me." The girl notices that the boy's skin is discolored, orange in spots.

    "I know that feeling." the girl giggled.

    "Well, um, see you later." The boy's face became red.

    "You too." the girl blushed.

    What was this feeling? thought Allysa as she walked home. Her head was full of pictures of this young boy. He was cute, with messy hair, just the way she liked it. His style of clothing was strange, like her's. He wore a purple vest, which didn't match his baseball jersey and jeans. One item that didn't match the rest of the outfit, just like her. That day, she wore an unmatching headband with her pink dress and denim jacket combo. They both wore sneakers that matched the outfits they wore. She knew that something was different about this boy. She just didn't know what. She walked in the door, avoiding her brother and sister. She told her sister everything, but she just couldn't form the words today. Today was different. She couldn't tell Shayla anything. Shayla had ALWAYS been her closest friend, and she couldn't tell her what she'd seen. Allysa would NOT be used to this.

    "Hey, girl, you alright?" Shayla wondered.

    "Fine, fine." Allysa replied.

    "Okay...."

    Meanwhile...

    Moe ran to the Clubhouse as quick as he could. He had to get to his drums, his rope, his life. He didn't like being a hidden Doodlebop. He hated being called Jon. He wished that he could just be Moe Doodle, not Jonathan Welxer, co stars of Lisa Lennox and Chad Mcnamara, then Moe Doodle, brother of DeeDee and Rooney Doodle. He just wanted to be Moe. Moe Candrel Doodle. That's all. Why was he cursed the way he was? Why did he have to be the one boy with a family of amazing musicians and have to hide his real life? Moe hated his talent as far as the way he was forced to use it.

    "DeeDee, Moe's home!" Rooney exclaimed

    "About time!" DeeDee said, almost angry.

    "Can I talk to you guys about something?"

    "Sure, Moe." Rooney replied.

    "Make it quick." DeeDee said.

    "Okay, well I met this girl today-"

    "A girl?" Rooney asked.

    "Yes, a girl, Roon. She was.... I don't know. She was different. I think she has something hidden in her life. Something she doesn't even know about."

    "Ha! Like you could see that! I have that gift!" DeeDee shouted.

    Rooney said nothing. He just got up and went to his room. Moe did the same, leaving DeeDee alone in her room. DeeDee sat down and pouted. What was Moe thinking? He couldn't have her gift. No one could. Why would Moe see this "thing" this girl has? I'll have to stop this.


    Last edited by Jesus_rocks on Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:52 pm; edited 1 time in total
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Chapter Two

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Fri Jul 02, 2010 1:52 pm

    Chapter Two: One Small Drawing
    A boy is seen standing at a locker. Allysa is seen trying to open her own locker, which is next to the boy.

    "Need some help?" asked a familier voice.

    "Oh, yes please." Allysa replied. Where had she heard that voice before? Was he the boy she'd met? No, he couldn't be. That boy had orange splotches on his skin. His was almost flawless. She looked at his hair, but it was well kept. Messy, but short, unlike the other boy. But then again, that could be the boy. He had the same amazing eyes. His eyes were a soft blueish green color. Soon, her locker was open.

    "Thanks. Are you new here? I've never seen you around."

    "Yeah, my older brother enrolled me so he could work. So, what's your name again?"

    "I never told you." Allysa awkwardly laughed.

    "Oh, yeah. I'm Jon. Jonathan Welxer."

    "Allysa Sirianni. Well, I've got to get to class. Do you need help finding your first class?"

    "I should be fine, thank you."

    "Oh, alright. See you around then." Allysa said, softly turning to go to class.

    "See you."

    Allysa walked into her room. Shayla and Kadyn had to prepare for Shayla's senior prom. Allysa was lucky. She could hide her secrets a little while longer. She began to look for a diary to begin. It was her final grade before the final exam for Creative Writing. They were to write a diary of their last days of high school, but turn it into a fantasy world. Easy. Very easy. This was Allysa's favorite class. She could be creative with her diary. She could write stories and draw picture. She could flaten flowers and decorate the cover. She wasn't just an author, but an artist. She could draw people like it was nothing! Sure, it took years to perfect her style, but she could always draw well. Then she remembered that she could draw the boy she'd seen. That's when she took out a piece of paper and began to draw the boy as she remembered him.

    The next day, Jon stood by the locker again. She decided to show him the drawing. Jon was amazed at the detail. Then he mumbled something under his breath. This boy really seems to like my drawing. I wonder why he's acting like this. Allysa thought. Jon then acknowledged her and went to class. Allysa did the same, comparing her drawing to Jon in her head. The face and eyes definately matched, but his skin and hair still didn't. Allysa was heart broken. She had hoped for him to match drawing. She knew the feeling she'd felt. She had fallen in love.

    DeeDee is seen messing with her lip gloss. Her already pink lips were pursed, and she began to apply the unneeded coat of lip gloss. Rooney was laughing at a small invention of his. It made the funniest little noise. No one knew qutie what it was, but they laughed anyways. Moe went to his room. He had to start his French I homework. He began to write out a note to Allysa. He'd seen her at school. The girl he had bumped into. She'd remembered him, just as he'd remembered her. She'd drawn a picture of him. He wrote in french, because he had heard her speak french very well. The note read:

    Cher Allysa,

    Nous nous sommes rencontrés auparavant, oui. Cette peinture que vous avez tirée était stupéfiante. Je voudrais que vous sachiez que la peinture a de moi. Nous nous sommes rencontrés par hasard dans les rues. Répondez s'il vous plaît .

    Sincèrement,
    Jonathan Welxer

    Moe then folds the paper and places it in his French textbook. He then completes his homework and goes to enjoy a nice brother to brother time with Rooney. They begin to discuss how they could find the girl outside of school. Rooney wanted to see what was so special about this girl. He wondered how this girl had made Moe come home in a slight trance. Anything that kept his brother from running around the house like crazy was going to hurt Rooney's studies. Rooney studied Moe's rambunctious behavior. He needed his happy-go-lucky brother to be hyper again.

    "Dites, vous la voyez dans le parc. Que dites-vous?"
    (Say, you see her in the park. What do you say?)

    "Hé, Allysa. Agréable à bientôt."
    (Hey, Allysa. Nice to see you.)

    "Bon. Elle descend la rue ?"
    (Good. She's walking down the street?)

    "Hé, qu'est-ce qu'il y a ?"
    (Hey, what's up?)

    As the moment continued, DeeDee started to listen. Moe was crushing on a girl? That's not like him. Especially a normal human girl like this one that he's talking about. How would she get rid of her? DeeDee knew that if Moe dated a human, the whole band would be destroyed! What could she do?

    "Dee? What's wrong?" It was Peyton. Peyton was her best friend.

    "Hey, Pey. Moe's starting to crush on some girl. Could you watch him at school?"

    "No prob, brah." Peyton agreed. Peyton had always been a little bit of a surfer. She followed her brother everywhere when they were young, and he was a surfing star.

    "Thanks, pey. I can always count on you. Let's go." And the two girls left to hang out at the beach.

    Allysa went to bed that night thinking about Jon and the boy. Moe went to bed thinking about Allysa. They knew that they would be together, someday....
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Chapter Three

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:11 pm

    Chapter Three: Momma's Locket
    Allysa holds her hand over her heart. It's beating slightly faster than normal. She can't breath as easy as normal. Jon was standing by her locker again. Why did he always stand there? Did he like her? Was he a stalker, or a spy? Something was wrong. I could tell. I really could.

    "Hey, um, I, uh, have to tell you something." Jon stuttered.

    "Um, okay, what is it?"

    "Um... Uh...." Jon mumbled as he look for something. He pulled a peice of paper out of his French textbook. As he unfoldedit he began to read. "Cher Allysa,

    Nous nous sommes rencontrés auparavant, oui. Cette peinture que vous avez tirée était stupéfiante. Je voudrais que vous sachiez que la peinture a de moi. Nous nous sommes rencontrés par hasard dans les rues. Répondez s'il vous plaît .

    Sincèrement,
    Jonathan Welxer"

    (Dear Allysa,
    We met before, yes. This drawing that you drew was amazing. I would like you to know that the drawing is of me. We met by chance in the streets. Please reply.
    Sincerely,
    Jonathan Welxer)

    "Okay, then, What was I wearing that day?"

    "Pink dress, denim jacket, unmatching green headband. What did I wear?"

    "Red baseball jersey and jeans with a purple vest."

    "You're just as good as me."

    Jon had more to tell, but the bell rang. They would be late for class. Allysa wrote a note to him during french class. The note read:
    Jon,
    je sais que vous avez plus à le dire. Veuillez me rencontrer en parc après école.
    Avec amour,
    Allysa

    (Jon,
    I know you have more to tell. Please meet me in the park after school.
    With love,
    Allysa)

    After school that day, instead of going to greet his brother and sister at home, Moe followed Allysa to the park. He felt uneasy, but he knew he had to tell his secret. Allysa had something hiding as well. If he shared his secret, she would share hers. He just knew it. Allysa went far out into the woods of the park. Soon she stoped and climbed up to a tree. She knew that Moe was following her. Moe quickly flung himself up the tree and entered a small treehouse. He laughed when he saw Allysa trying to put in some secret knock. She smirked and stood back as a secret passage opened. She motioned for him to follow her into the passage. He did.

    "What is this place?"

    "This is my secret treehouse. It belongs to my mom, but She's been gone for years. She always taped that rhythm on the kitchen counter when I was little, and then she brought me out here when I could run. Someone came after us, and I ran straight to the first treehouse I saw. It was this one. Mom shouted, 'The rhythm, Allysa' and I never heard from her again. I tapped the rhythm out on the back wall and it opened up, just like it did now."

    "I had no idea..." Jon said, sypathetically.

    "Yeah... So, you wanted to say something?"

    "Well, uh..... I'm actually a famous children's rockstar."

    "You look like one."

    "Which one?"

    "My favorite children's rockstar, Moe Doodle."

    Moe then smiled. It was too late to get back home without a disguise. He was transforming into his true identidy. He was changing into Moe Candrel Doodle, and he wasn't looking back now. Allysa smiled. She seemed to love the fact that she was meeting a Doodlebop. Her eyes started to glow, as well as a heart locket shape from under her skin. She wasn't a normal gril. Her skin began to change to the same shade as his. Her hair became a dark orange and her clothes tranform into a bright yellow dress and orange tights combo. Her voice rang out like silver bells at Christmas time and her eyes were brighter than the blue sky at midday. This was the different thing about her. She had the same ability that he had!

    "Moe! Moe, buddy!" cried Peyton. Where was he? DeeDee would freak if he'd been caught in his Doodlebop form. She saw him and a girl who looked just like him come down from a random tree. Moe saw Peyton and asked her to help them get to the clubhouse unseen."Fine," she answered, "I'll help, but only 'cause DeeDee wants ya home."

    Allysa stayed silent. She wouldn't speak. Shayla would hear her voice, and she was out looking for a prom dress. Kadyn saw the two hiding in trenchcoats following Peyton. He stopped them.

    "Miss, you do realize that you're being followed, right?"

    "Yes. This is my best friend's brother and cousin."

    "Okay, Just checking."

    They hurried home from there. Allysa was changing just as they reached the clubhouse. She told Moe that she was going home. Moe agreed and went inside, telling Rooney the whole story. That night, they two dreamt about the glowing locket.
    avatar
    kittyfan
    Admin

    Number of posts : 4252
    Age : 31
    Registration date : 2009-02-26

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by kittyfan on Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:55 pm

    wow good chapters allysa i wish i could be in it but i probably won;t be able too and well i guess that is ok with me Sad
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:02 am

    Nah, I can still get you into the story. You could be a cousin in the next chapter! The next chapter is for my character's family, so I could use a few new names.
    avatar
    kittyfan
    Admin

    Number of posts : 4252
    Age : 31
    Registration date : 2009-02-26

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by kittyfan on Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:50 pm

    yeah ok thanks sis
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:47 pm

    No problem. I'll have to make sure I save the chapter somewhere so that I don't keep losing what I write.
    avatar
    MasterOfEvil
    Admin

    Number of posts : 8026
    Age : 27
    Location : Ehhh ..... Lost
    Registration date : 2009-03-08

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:47 pm

    Can add me ... if u want xP


    _________________
    A Coward Never Triumph And A Hero Never Runs.


    Loyalty
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:21 pm

    Cool, thanks! Needed another person.
    avatar
    kittyfan
    Admin

    Number of posts : 4252
    Age : 31
    Registration date : 2009-02-26

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by kittyfan on Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:06 am

    ok can't wait to read the next chapter allysa
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Chapter Four

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:16 am

    Chapter Four: Kadyn, Jen, and the Mystery of Momma
    Allysa woke up to the sound of small crystals hitting the floor. Jen is seen just outside Allysa's bedroom door, picking up her sparkling crystals. They shone brighter than anything she'd ever seen, except the locket from under her skin. She thought about Moe and Peyton, and how they both showed a change in colors of their skin. Peyton had a very light pinkish tone to her skin, to where she could pass as normal. Moe was too deep of a yellow-orange, so he had to really disguise himself. She wondered how much make-up it took. She'd have to remember to call him Jon at school, as well. Shouldn't be too hard, she thought. Jen suddenly asked for help.

    "Allysa? Could you help me put this crystal heart back together? I think it's our second clue to Auntie Ally's disappearance." she said softly, so that Shayla and Kayden wouldn't hear.

    "Sure, Jenny."

    The girls quickly got to work. Shayla soon came into the room to see what they were doing. Allysa remained quiet as she placed each orange piece of the crystal into the words "jolie fleur", which in french meant lovely flower. The rest of the pieces were pink and blue, which created the heart. Shayla was amazed when she saw a refelction of a girl in the crystals where her sister should have been. Shayla started laughing at the reflection that was there. It looked like a girl version on Moe Doodle from the Doodlebops! It was funny that Allysa's reflection was like that to Shayla. They loved the Doodles! She was about to ask why it was like that when she saw a tear go down her little sister's face. Allysa got up and went to pray. Shayla knew she was upset. She went to go ask what was wrong.

    "Allysa? Are you okay sis?" Shayla asked

    "Momma showed me that heart when I was little. She said I was her lovely flower and gave me her love. She visits me every night with a new flower to look for. I find the flowers all over the place, because Momma plants them. She has a way of being here when she's far away. I wish she would tell me where she's at so she can come home. I miss her. I love her." Allysa explained.

    "Allysa, baby girl, Momma's been gone since you were five. There's no way that she can visit you every night, unless you dream it. I think it's time you give up your search. Momma's not coming home." Shayla whispered. Allysa looked at her like she was going to kill her. Shayla didn't realize that Allysa believed so strongly that Momma was out there. She never knew how much she truely cared. Anyone else would've been partying until they turned 18 if their mom disappeared. Allysa wouldn't. She just wouldn't. Why was she like this? Just as she was about to ask her another question, she got up and left, and for some reason, Shayla giggled.

    Allysa left for a family picnic in the park later that day. They were telling her the same things Shayla said. Jen was the only one that understood Allysa's need for her mother. Jen had taken the heart to the treehouse for Allysa to hide. On her way back, Allysa called her name. She hurried back and saw Allysa and Moe running. Jen yelled for them to get in the treehouse. Suddenly, Allysa fell to her knees and began to change into her other form. She couldn't move!

    "Allysa, you have to get up!" Moe shouted.

    "I.... can't...... move........" She stuttered. Her eyes were shut.

    "Open your eyes, Allysa! Open your eyes!" He replied.

    They were getting closer when she jumped up and flung herself into the treehouse. Moe followed and shut the door. Jen ran. Kadyn was close by. He heard Jen cry out for help. Soon he saw the group chasing her. In the front of the group, was his long lost brother, Camryn. Kadyn was shocked. His own brother was part of the group his family had run from for years! He tried to shout his name, but They'd turned away. The edge of the forest was a fortress. They couldn't leave the forest! That's what Mom had done! Because of her, they couldn't leave the forest! Too bad Shayla and Allysa didn't know the full family history. He had too tell someone that Mom was alive, but after Allysa's belief that she was alive was denied, what would they say to him? Allysa and Jen would be the only ones to believe him. He quickly took Jen's arm and lead her to the treehouse. He knocked on the wall to ask to be let in. Moe callled out for him to wait. Who was this boy? Why was he with his little sister?

    "Kadyn? Is that you?" Allysa whispered behind the wall.

    "Yes, me and Jen. May we come in?"

    "Momma's mystery isn't believed by both of you." Allysa said, almost to tears.

    "Actually, I found out that you're right, baby sis. Mom actually is alive, and protecting us. She doesn't let that group past the forest, so we are safe everywhere, but here. Mom is alive, and so is Camryn."

    "Camryn? Who's that?" Jen asked.

    "Camcam?" Allysa asked, confused by the name.

    "Yes, Allysa, it's Camcam. Camryn is our brother. He's my younger brother, yours and Shayla's older brother, and your cousin, Jen."

    "He's still alive? But how?" Moe asked. Suddenly a surge of memory came in when the door opened to Kadyn and Jen.

    "They kidnapped him when he was little. He's just like little Lysa here. He can change just like Mom could. That's why Mom and Dad made us Sirianni's instead of Choler's. Mom could change into a girl like your sister, Camryn like your brother, and now Lysa, the youngest changer, like you." Kadyn explained.

    "And true love was to be found in one of the changers. Correct Kaykay?" Allysa said, somehow knowing some of the family history and legend. Kadyn could only nod, seeing that true love had been found. All he had to do was sit back and watch. The war would end soon.
    avatar
    MasterOfEvil
    Admin

    Number of posts : 8026
    Age : 27
    Location : Ehhh ..... Lost
    Registration date : 2009-03-08

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:00 pm

    =O Dat was awsum!


    _________________
    A Coward Never Triumph And A Hero Never Runs.


    Loyalty
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:05 pm

    Glad you liked it. Chapter five is coming soon, I promise.
    avatar
    MasterOfEvil
    Admin

    Number of posts : 8026
    Age : 27
    Location : Ehhh ..... Lost
    Registration date : 2009-03-08

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:21 pm

    I can't wait 2 read it. =D


    _________________
    A Coward Never Triumph And A Hero Never Runs.


    Loyalty
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:25 pm

    Yeah, right now, I'm working on pictures of the characters. I'm also going to put Allysa's drawing from Chapter two up.
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:21 pm

    THE CHARACTERS!

    Allysa and Moe/Jon


    Rooney/Chad


    Camryn


    DeeDee/Lisa


    Shayla and Jerry <-(Later in the story)


    Kadyn


    Peyton


    (Uncolored version)
    Allysa's drawing of Moe/Jon from Chapter two
    avatar
    MasterOfEvil
    Admin

    Number of posts : 8026
    Age : 27
    Location : Ehhh ..... Lost
    Registration date : 2009-03-08

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:31 pm

    So awsum! Luv da pics! =D


    _________________
    A Coward Never Triumph And A Hero Never Runs.


    Loyalty
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:32 pm

    Thanks, I worked hard on them.
    avatar
    MasterOfEvil
    Admin

    Number of posts : 8026
    Age : 27
    Location : Ehhh ..... Lost
    Registration date : 2009-03-08

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by MasterOfEvil on Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:34 pm

    It shows! They're gr8! =D


    _________________
    A Coward Never Triumph And A Hero Never Runs.


    Loyalty
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Mon Aug 09, 2010 9:35 pm

    Again, thanks!
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:28 pm

    Chapter Five: Moe and the Locket
    "Moe! Where have you been?" DeeDee called. She wasn't happy about her brother never coming home anymore. She knew something was up. He came home, carrying a small necklace. He was smiling at it. A very big smile.

    "Out with a friend. Why?" Moe replied, still looking at the necklace.

    "You aren't suppoesed to leave the house! It's dangerous in oyur Doodlebop form!"

    "So? I know how to hide, if you don't remember." Moe was going at it tonight.

    "It still doesn't matter! Kids can spot you easily! You're still a deep yellow-orange! It's going to be easy to see you!"

    "Well, Allysa doesn't care! And neither does her family!"

    "You gave our secret away! You idiot! Now Jazz will figure out! The band's ruined!" She then ran to her room, slamming the door, leaving Moe standing there shocked that his sister would actually be upset over not having to hide from someone. Rooney came out and sat him down, keeping him from falling over. Eventually he came out of it and cried. He knew Dee just didn't understand. had she known the family history, he would have been able to explain, but the family book had been destroyed. Only Rooney had been smart enough to copy it down with Pop Coran before he died, and he wouldn't show the book to anyone.

    "Rooney, where's the family book?" he finally asked.

    "The family book? Why would you need that?"

    "Research. I'm curious to the family's history."

    "Moe, there's another reason, and if you don't tell me, I'm sure Allysa will."

    "No Roon. Allysa won't tell you, because she and I made a promise to hide this from whoever we see unfit to know."

    "And I'm unfit?"

    "Yes. This is between four people, me, Allysa, her brother, Kadyn, and her cousin Jen. It's their family matters, but a legend in their family just might be in ours, too. I need to know if it is or not."

    "Top shelf to the right. It should be there." Rooney said, giving up. He decided he was going to find Allysa, so he set out for the school. When Allysa and Shayla got off the bus, he asked to speak with them. He explained that his younger brother knew them and wanted to know what secret was here. Allysa told him to back off and leave her and her sister alone, but stuck a note in his pocket when no one was looking. She had a plan. When Rooney was alone, he looked in his pocket to find the note. It read:

    Trouvez le treehouse marqué avec un "D" dans la forêt. Soyez prudents, vous pouvez être attaqués. Moe et moi se trouverons présent en attendant.

    -Allysa

    (Find the treehouse marked with a "D" in the forest. Be careful, you may be attacked. Moe and I will be there waiting.

    -Allysa)


    "She's a smart one." Rooney laughed, holding the note close. He would have to put the disguise one a little while longer....

    Moe stood by Allysa's locker like usual. He remembered that he couldn't be called Moe at school, so he'd have to respond to Allysa calling him Jon. How hard could that be?

    "Hey, Jon? We've got trouble."

    Moe nodded. He couldn't speak. Allysa looked gorgeous that day. There was something about her today. It was either the way her skirt twirled when she turned or the shine off her glasses, but something made her look, different. Good different. Like when you change the color of your shirt and it looks good, different. Anyone else wouldn't have noticed this.

    "Jon?"

    "Huh? Oh, sorry, you just look really good today."

    "Um, thanks, but we have a problem."

    "What's going on?"

    "It's Kadyn."

    DeeDee heard Rooney working on an invention in his room. Fat chance it would be successful. She knew that her brother failed at just about anything he did to try and disguise the band. They should have only stuck with the original disguises. Shortly after, he left for some appointment. That gave DeeDee time to snoop around in Moe's room, as pay back for ruining the band. She went into the room, and was shocked to see it clean. Her brother was changing? She saw the family book laying on his bed and picked it up. A page was bookmarked. The book suddenly opened, showing her the Legend of Lilly. DeeDee was shocked at the truth that she beheld. the legend spoke of a family that ran from death by fire. The group that wanted them dead then kidnapped the youngest son of the family and trained him to kill his family. Three years later, the mother and her youngest daughter went into a forest. The mother gave herself up to protect her family, leaving the youngest daughter alone in the family tree house. The daughter was to first find true love within the Doodle family, then end the war between the two groups. She closed the book and wondered if Moe was the one the daughter fell in love with. She went to her room and cried, knowing she may have almost ruined a chance to end a war. To end the deaths of so many people. To end a bit of violence in the world. And then Peyton came in and comforted her, knowing the family history well enough to know what she just read. And she was proud.

    "Allysa! Where's my dress?" Shayla called.

    "Closet. My locket?" Allysa replied.

    "Missing."

    "Wrong, under my skin." Allysa said, as a matter of factly.

    "Yeah, right." Shayla responded, sarcastically.

    Allysa ran out the door then, hurrying to meet with Moe. Rooney was at the treehouse. He greeted me and said congradulations. Allysa laughed and lead him up. Moe wasn't there yet. Strange. she opened the small door on the floor and pulled out her family book and let Rooney read it. As he read, he began to cry. He read about the deceased of the family; he read about the lost hearts, the lost minds, the lost children, everything! He remembered the one thing he left out in the copy of the family book. He left out the missing brother of his father. Moe then walked in. Everything fell apart. Moe got so angry. He yelled at Rooney to get out and leave them alone. He didn't want any one messing with him and his girl, or at least soon to be, if he could get the courage to tell her. Rooney didn't leave.

    "Moe, I know stuff that you need."

    "I want you to leave, and let me speak with Allysa myself."

    "Okay, fine. Let me know if you need any help." Rooney left.

    "What was all that about?" Allysa said.

    "I wanted to give you something, but I wanted to be alone to give it to you." he replied, blushing.

    "Well, what is it?"

    Moe pulled out the necklace he had. The locket that showed up around Allysa's neck when she changed. A gold heart shaped locket that held a picture of her mother inside, with Allysa standing right next to her. Allysa's eyes were filled with tears. She threw her arms around Moe and cried. She couldn't do anything else. Moe wrapped his arms around Allysa gently. He felt a shock go through his whole being when she touched him. The way her skin felt against his was outstanding. She was soft, gentle, fragile. He took care not to hurt her. He took care to show her that he was there for her. He didn't want to let go, ever. They stayed there all night, eventually falling asleep. When they awoke, Jen stood over top of them.

    "What are you guys doing?" Jen said, a bit angry.

    "Did we fall asleep here? Opps!" Allysa giggled.

    "Sorry about that. Here." Moe appologized, placing the locket around Allysa's neck. Just then, Allysa kissed him. Moe sat there, shocked. He didn't expect her to kiss him. He didn't expect it at all.

    The locket changed everything.
    avatar
    BloodLord

    Number of posts : 2623
    Age : 28
    Location : Somewhere
    Registration date : 2009-02-28

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by BloodLord on Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:39 pm

    Cool story! Love the pics. Excellent job. =)
    avatar
    ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥

    Number of posts : 1240
    Age : 21
    Location : The heart of a wonderful man.
    Registration date : 2009-12-12

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by ♥Miss♥Teddy♥Bear♥ on Wed Aug 11, 2010 10:41 am

    Glad you liked it!

    Sponsored content

    Re: Is it love, or destiny?

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is Sat Nov 18, 2017 3:08 am