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    Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Tue Mar 17, 2009 2:50 pm

    The Saddle Club Cast
    Carole Hanson: Keenan MacWilliam
    Stephanie "Stevie" Lake: Sophie Bennett
    Lisa Atwood: Lara Jean Marshall
    Veronica diAngelo: Heli Simpson
    Max Regnery: Brett Tucker
    Elizabeth Regnery "Mrs. Reg": Catherine Wilkin
    Phil Marsten: Glenn Meldrum
    Kristi Cavanaugh: Kia Luby
    Melanie Atwood: Marisa Siketa
    Ashley Taylor: Janelle Corlass-Brown
    Red O'Malley: James O'Dea
    Brian "Scooter" Mulcahy: Alex Marriott
    Andrew "Drew" Regnery: Nikolai Nikolaeff
    Dr. Judy Barker: Maggie King
    Deborah Hale Regnery: Cathy Godbold

    The Kenley Family:
    Ria Kenley: Me
    Ria’s mother, Kendra Kenley: Kelly Preston
    Ria's father, Mayhew Kenley: Michael Keaton
    Ria’s older brother, Jayden Kenley: Jeremy London
    Ria’s older brother, Jayden’s twin Jordan Kenley: Jason London
    Ria's older brother, Clinton Kenley: Christian Bale
    Ria’s older sister, Tara Kenley: Tina Barrett
    Ria's older brother, Perry Kenley: Paul Cattermole
    Ria's older brother, Perry's twin brother, Jarvis Kenley: John Cena
    Ria's older sister, Rosabelle Kenley: Rachel Stevens
    Ria's older sisters, Janice Kenley: Jo O' Meara
    Ria's older brother, Ashton Kenley: Drew Fuller
    Ria's older sister, Ashton’s twin sister Seraphine Kenley: Stephanie Beard
    Ria’s older brother, Julian Kenley: Johnny Pacar
    Ria’s older sister, Julian’s twin sister, Havana Kenley: Hannah Spearritt
    Ria’s older brother, Jude Kenley: Jon Lee
    Ria's twin brother, Lyndon Kenley: Lucas Grabeel
    Ria’s younger brother, Randall Kenley: Robert Pattinson
    Ria's younger brother, Marden Kenley: Mason Musso
    Ria's younger brother, Meldon Kenley: Mitchel Musso
    Ria's younger brother, Allan Kenley: Alex Ludwig
    Ria's younger sister, Arabelle Kenley: AnnaSophia Robb
    Ria’s younger brother, Macon Kenley: Marc Musso

    The Kenley Family Horses:
    Ria's horse, Ruby
    Ria's mother's horse, Area
    Ria's father's horse, Matt
    Ria's older brother Jayden's horse, Jay
    Ria's older brother Jordan's horse, Dan
    Ria's older brother Clinton’s horse, Clint
    Ria’s older sister Tara’s horse, Terra
    Ria’s older brother Perry’s horse, Pierre
    Ria’s older sister Rosabelle’s horse, Rose
    Ria’s older sister Janice’s horse, Jan
    Ria’s older sister Ashton’s horse, Ash
    Ria’s older sister Seraphine’s horse, Sera
    Ria’s older brother Julian’s horse, Jules
    Ria’s older sister Havana’s horse, Ana
    Ria’s older brother Jude’s horse, Jue
    Ria’s twin brother Lyndon’s horse, Don
    Ria’s younger brother Randall’s horse, Ran
    Ria’s younger brother Marden’s horse, Den
    Ria’s younger brother Meldon’s horse, Mel
    Ria’s younger brother Allan’s horse, Al
    Ria’s younger sister Arabelle’s horse, Ara
    Ria’s younger brother Macon’s horse, Mac

    The Granger Family
    Maxie Granger: Amber
    Maxie's mother, Terri Granger: Terri Irwin
    Maxie's father, Colby Granger: Dylan Bruno
    Maxie's older brother, Sportacus Granger: Magnús Örn Scheving
    Maxie's older sister, Julietta Granger: Lisa J. Lennox
    Maxie's older brother, Michael Granger: Michael Jackson
    Maxie's older sister, Brenda Granger: Brenda Blue
    Maxie's older brother, Manny Granger: Wilmer Valderrama
    Maxie's older brother, Zachary Granger: Mark-Paul Gosselaar
    Maxie's younger sister, Stephanie Granger: Julianna Rose Mauriello
    Maxie's younger brother, Pixel Granger: Kobie Powell
    Maxie's younger sister, Trixie Granger: Sarah Burgess
    Maxie's younger brother, Stingy Granger: Jodi Eichelberger
    Maxie's younger brother, Ziggy Granger: Guðmundur Þór Kárason

    The Granger Family Horses
    Maxie's horse, Maxine
    Maxie's horse's Maxine's mother, Estrella
    Maxie's horse's Maxine's father, Starling
    Stephanie’s horse, Maxine's younger sister, Stephi
    Pixel's horse, Maxine and Stephi's younger brother, Pixey
    Trixie's horse, Maxine, Stephi and Pixey's younger sister, Trix
    Stingy's horse Maxine, Stephi, Pixey and Trix's younger brother, Sting
    Ziggy's horse Maxine, Stephi, Pixey, Trix and Sting's younger brother, Zigor

    The Personal Horse Trainers
    Maxie's personal horse trainer, Sportacus: Magnús Örn Scheving
    Stephanie's personal horse trainer, Julietta: Lisa J. Lennox
    Pixel's personal horse trainer, Michael: Michael Jackson
    Trixie's personal horse trainer, Brenda: Brenda Blue
    Stingy's personal horse trainer, Manny: Wilmer Valderrama
    Ziggy's personal horse, Zachary: Mark-Paul Gosselaar


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Wed Mar 18, 2009 11:51 am

    Here's chapter 1:

    Chapter 1
    Welcome To Pine Hollow

    One day a beautiful 25 year old lady named Ria Kenley is sitting on the couch in her living room. Ria’s mother Kendra walked into the room and sat down next to Ria.
    “What do you want mom?” Ria asked.
    “I just got off the phone with Maxie’s mother Terri.” Kendra answered.
    “Why are you telling me?” Ria asked.
    “Terri is sending Maxie to Pine Hollow and I think that you should go too.” Kendra answered.
    “I don’t want to go because I’m scared.” Ria said.
    “The only way get over your fear is to face it and you can’t be afraid forever just because of your accident.” Kendra replied.
    Ria got her stuff ready. A few hours later Ria, her siblings along with Maxie and her siblings are just arriving at Pine Hollow. Max Regnery the owner of Pine Hollow walked over to them.
    “Hi there girls, my name is Max Regnery and I’m the owner of Pine Hollow.” Max said.
    “My name is Maxie Granger and my mother Terri Granger phone here a few hours ago.” Maxie replied.
    Max smiled.
    “Oh right I remember now.” Max said.
    Ria sighed.
    “I’m Maxie’s best friend Ria Kenley.” Ria replied.
    “Would like to meet everyone else?” Max asked.
    “Yes that would be wonderful.” Maxie answered.
    Ria looked at Max.
    “Could you excuse us for a few minutes?” Ria asked.
    “Yeah sure.” Max answered.
    Ria grabbed Maxie’s arm and took her out of earshot.
    “Do you like him?” Ria asked.
    “No, I don’t but I’m in love with him.” Maxie answered.
    “Well you better not keep in too long because it will only eat your life.” Ria said.
    Maxie and Ria walked back over to where Max is. Max’s mother Elizabeth walked over.
    “Who are these girls?” Elizabeth asked.
    “Their names are Ria Kenley and Maxie Granger.” Max answered.
    Deborah walked over Max and hugged him. Maxie rolled her eyes.
    “I miss you Max.” Deborah said.
    Max rolled his eyes.
    “Yeah same here.” Max replied.
    Ria looked at Deborah than at Max.
    “Who is she?” Ria asked.
    “This is my wife Deborah Hale Regnery.” Max answered.
    Maxie’s eyes widen in shock and she got a sad look on her face. Ria gave Maxie a hug. Stevie, Carole and Lisa walked over.
    “Hi there I’m Stevie Lake.” Stevie said.
    “I’m Carole Hanson.” Carole replied.
    “My name is Lisa Atwood.” Lisa said.
    “I’m Ria Kenley.” Ria replied.
    “My name is Maxie Granger and Ria’s best friend.” Maxie said.
    “Are you two staying here for awhile?” Stevie asked.
    “Yes we are” Maxie answered.
    “No I’m not.” Ria said.
    “Oh yes you are because your mother told my mother that you weren’t leaving here until you overcome your fear.” Maxie replied.
    Ria sighed.
    “What fear would that be?” Elizabeth asked.
    “A few years ago Ria had an accident when her horse Ruby got spooked when she and I were riding in the forest.” Maxie answered.
    “I wish you hadn’t have told them that.” Ria yelled.
    “Don’t yell me or I’ll phone your mother than get her to tell your father you’re being mean to me.” Maxie screamed.
    “Whoa girls that’s enough.” Max said.
    Ria sighed.
    “Would care to tell exactly what happen that day in the forest?” Elizabeth asked.
    “Yeah I sure I guess.” Ria answered.
    ~Flashback to a few years ago~
    Ria is riding in the forest on her horse Ruby along with Maxie and her horse Maxine.
    “It’s such a beautiful today.” Maxie said.
    “Yeah I know.” Ria replied.
    All of a sudden something spooked Ruby and she started to get all panicked. Ria lost her balance than fell off and hit head hard knocking herself unconscious. Ruby trotted off. Maxie jumped off Maxine and ran over to Ria.
    “RIA WAKE UP.” Maxie screamed.
    Maxie’s older brother Sportacus is close by and heard Maxie’s scream. Sportacus came running and noticed Ria on the ground right away. Sportacus looked at Maxie.
    “What happen here?” Sportacus asked.
    “Ruby got spooked than started to get all panicked and Ria fell off.” Maxie answered.
    Sportacus scooped up Ria in his arms and carried her back home. Maxie and Sportacus’s mother Terri seen them coming from the kitchen window. Terri ran out.
    “What happen to Ria?” Terri asked.
    “Ruby got spooked and got panicked which caused Ria to fall off her.” Sportacus answered.
    Terri ran back inside and dials Ria’s phone number. Ria’s mother Kendra picked up the receiver.
    “Hi this is Kendra Kenley.” Kendra said.
    “Kendra this is Terri and you need to come quick.” Terri replied.
    “Why?” Kendra asked.
    “There’s been accident involving your daughter.” Terri answered.
    Kendra and Terri hung up on each other. Kendra ran next door to find Terri, Sportacus and Maxie sitting next to Ria. Kendra sat down next to Ria.
    “Come on Ria baby wake up.” Kendra said.
    Ria slowly opened her eyes and looked around.
    “What happen? How did I get here?” Ria asked.
    “Ruby got spooked than all panicked which caused you to fall off her and my brother carried you here.” Maxie answered.
    Ria got to her feet and hugged Sportacus.
    “Thanks Sportacus.” Ria replied.
    “No problem anything for Maxie’s best friend.” Sportacus said.
    Ria looked at her mother.
    “I don’t want to ever ride a horse again.” Ria replied.
    Terri sighed than looked at Maxie.
    “What happened to Ruby?” Terri asked.
    “She trotted off just after Ria fell off her.” Maxie answered.
    All of a sudden Ruby appeared and neighed. Ria sighed and walked inside.
    ~End of flashback~
    “Did you find out what spooked Ruby?” Max asked.
    “No we never did.” Ria answered.
    “You really need get back on horse.” A voice said.
    They all turned around to see Red O’Malley standing behind them. Ria took one look at Red and fell instantly in love with him.
    “Red don’t do that.” Max replied.
    “Sorry Max.” Red said.
    Maxie looked at Red than at Max.
    “Who is he?” Maxie asked.
    “This is Red O’Malley.” Max answered.
    Ria smiled a little. Red noticed Ria and falls madly in love with her.
    “Who are these two new girls?” Red asked.
    “My name is Ria Kenley and the girl next to me is my best friend Maxie Granger.” Ria answered.
    Red smiled. A few hours later everyone is bed. Red is dreaming of Ria and making her his girl. Ria is dreaming about Red’s boyfriend. Maxie is dreaming of one day being with Max and of him divorcing Deborah. Max and Deborah are sleeping each other embrace.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Wed Mar 18, 2009 1:48 pm

    That was a great chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 2.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:31 pm

    Deedee's Girl wrote:That was a great chapter. I can't wait to read chapter 2.

    Thanks Amber. I'm currently working on chapter 2 so when it's done I'll post it.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:01 pm

    Here's chapter 2:

    Chapter 2
    Building Up Ria’s Confidence

    The next morning Ria woke up than got dressed for the day and goes off to think outside the stables. Red came out to get some more hay for the horses and noticed Ria. Red sat down next to Ria.
    “Are you still thinking about what I said yesterday?” Red asked.
    “Yeah I am.” Ria answered.
    “Do you want to get over your fear?” Red asked.
    “Yes I do because I want to ride Ruby again.” Ria answered.
    “I could help you.” Red said.
    Ria turned to face Red.
    “Would you really do that?” Ria asked.
    “Yes I would.” Red answered.
    Ria hugged Red really tight. Kristi sees them and gets angry look on her face. Veronica noticed Kristi’s angry face.
    “What’s your problem?” Veronica asked.
    “That girl is all over Red and it’s making mad.” Kristi answered.
    “Oh come on it’s not like he’s your boyfriend and he doesn’t even like you back.” Veronica said.
    Kristi scoffed and walked off. Veronica shook her head. Red seen the whole thing and shook his head.
    “What’s wrong?” Ria asked.
    “There’s this girl here that likes me and she’s always getting clingy around me which is really annoying.” Red answered.
    “What’s her name?” Ria asked.
    “Her name is Kristi Cavanaugh.” Red answered.
    Ria sighed a little.
    “Do you like her?” Ria asked.
    “No I don’t at all.” Red answered.
    Ria smiled a little. A few hours later Ria is out by horse pen. Ria sighed and started to sing Boy Like You by S Club 7.
    Hey boy
    What you need is a girl that can give you what you need
    A crazy a girl
    Someone like me
    Oh
    Boy you're single and free
    You like to play hard
    Live dangerously
    Oh
    Boy
    At the flick of your hand anything you ask for you can demand
    Oh
    Boy do you ever get bored getting all you want and more
    What you need is someone like you
    Who's gonna blow your pretty world in two
    Watch you playing 'round but that don't bother me
    I'm not in a rush 'cause I can see
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    I watch you paint the town
    Cruising up and down
    Picking all the cherries off the tree
    But a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    It's no joke
    It's funny to be staring at you but all I'm seeing is me
    Like you I like to live loud
    If you're looking for a good time look what you've found
    It's fun spending hard cash but it's over in a flash
    What you need is someone like me
    Who's gonna blow your pretty world for free
    Watch you playing 'round but that don't bother me
    I'm not in a rush 'cause I can see
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    I watch you paint the town
    Cruising up and down
    Picking all the cherries off the tree
    But a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    (You need a crazy girl)
    Someone who's gonna show you such a good time
    (You need a crazy girl)
    What you need is a girl who can give you what you need
    (You need a crazy girl)
    Someone who's gonna show you such a good time
    Good time
    What you need is someone like me
    Watch you playing 'round but that don't bother me
    I'm not in a rush 'cause I can see
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    I watch you paint the town
    Cruising up and down
    Picking all the cherries off the tree
    But a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    Watch you play around but that don't bother me
    I'm not in a rush 'cause I can see
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    I watch you do the things that make you who you are
    Can't you see it's written in the stars?
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me
    That a boy like you needs a crazy girl like me

    Red heard Ria singing but doesn’t know who it is. Red is looking around when Kristi walked up to him.
    “What are you looking for?” Kristi asked.
    “I just heard the most beautiful singing voice ever and I’m trying to figure it out who it was.” Red answered.
    “Oh it was me.” Kristi said.
    “I don’t think so Kristi because this sounded like an angel.” Red replied.
    “Have you totally lost it Red?” Kristi asked.
    “No I haven’t and leave me alone.” Red answered.
    Kristi shook her head and walked off. Red continued to find out who was singing. Ria sighed and started to sing If It’s Love by S Club 7.
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    When your world has fallen apart
    And still your strong of heart
    Something has changed
    Around you
    When the stars shine from the sky
    From morning until night
    Something has changed
    Inside you
    Now you're here, don't ever go
    If it's a dream don't wanna know
    Let me believe in
    This feeling for the rest of my life
    If it's love then I don't wanna come down
    If it's love then best just leave me to drown
    If it's love that I see, then don't rescue me
    Cos nothing could be greater then this rush
    If it's love
    When you've troubles and there's no
    And still the flowers grow
    Something has changed
    Around you
    When the future lifts your heart
    And hope is all you've got
    I know it's because I found you
    Now you have come, don't ever go
    If I'm wrong, don't wanna know
    Let me believe in
    This feeling for the rest of my life
    If it's love then I don't wanna come down
    If it's love then best just leave me to drown
    If it's love that I see, then don't rescue me
    Cos nothing could be greater then this rush
    If it's love
    Hold me now, make the feeling go on
    Hold me close, make the feeling so strong
    Can't be wrong, cos the feeling's so right
    Just let me say goodnight, for the rest of my life
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    If it's love then I don't wanna come down
    If it's love then best just leave me to drown
    If it's love that I see, then don't rescue me
    Cos nothing could be greater, nothing could be greater
    If it's love
    Only if it's love
    If it's love
    Only if it's love
    If it's love
    Only if it's love
    If it's love
    Only if it's love
    If it's love
    Only if it's love
    If it's love, if it's love baby
    Only if it's love

    Red’s eyes widen in shock when finds out that it’s Ria singing.
    “Wow she has a beautiful voice.” Red thought to himself.
    Ria started to sing Love Ain’t Gonna Wait For You by S Club 7.
    Yeah
    Yeah
    When your heartbeat's taking over and there's nowhere you can go
    And the love that you discover has finally taken hold
    When it feels like the beginning and the story will unfold
    There's a time to take your chances
    Don't be scared of the unknown
    Oh
    'Cause you can't fight it
    Don't deny it
    Love is stronger than each other
    Show me baby
    What you're gonna do
    Do
    'Cause love ain't gonna wait for you
    Don't run
    Don't hide
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    It's so good
    It's so right
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    You know that it's true
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    So baby hold me
    Bring me closer
    (Closer)
    Be the one I give my all
    Please don't wait for a minute longer
    (Wait for a minute longer)
    'Til you finally give your heart
    Oh
    You can't hide it
    Don't deny it
    Love is stronger than each other
    Show me baby
    What you're gonna do
    Do
    'Cause love ain't gonna wait for you
    Don't run
    Don't hide
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    It's so good
    It's so right
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    You know that it's true
    I can't hold back what I'm thinking
    Don't you tell me that I'm dreaming?
    You know that there's something you should do
    Do
    Do
    Do
    Do
    'Cause love ain't gonna wait for you
    (Ooh)
    Don't run
    (Don't run)
    Don't hide
    (Don't hide)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    It's so good
    (So good)
    It's so right
    (So right)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    (You)
    You know
    (You know)
    That it's true
    (That it's true)
    'Cause love ain't gonna wait for you
    (Ooh)
    Don't run
    (Don't run)
    Don't hide
    (Don't hide)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    It's so good
    (So good)
    It's so right
    (So right)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    (You)
    You know
    (You know)
    That it's true
    (That it's true)
    'Cause love ain't gonna wait for you
    (Ooh)
    Don't run
    (Don't run)
    Don't hide
    (Don't hide)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    It's so good
    (So good)
    It's so right
    (So right)
    Love ain't gonna wait for you
    (You)
    You know
    (You know)
    That it's true
    (That it's true)

    Red walked over to Ria. Ria noticed him.
    “Did you hear me singing?” Ria asked.
    “Yeah I did and you have singing voice of a thousand angels in moonlight.” Red answered.
    “Thanks Red.” Ria replied.
    Red smiled than kissed Ria on the forehead before leaving. Ria stood there staring at where Red just was. Maxie walked over to Ria.
    “What are staring at?” Maxie asked.
    “I’m staring at the spot where Red just was.” Ria answered.
    Maxie smiled a little.
    “Do you like Red?” Maxie asked.
    “Yes I do a lot.” Ria answered.
    Kristi over heard and stormed off made. A few hours later everyone is sleeping. Ria is dreaming of Red and Red is dreaming of Ria. Maxie is dreaming about one day being with Max. Max and Deborah are sleeping each other’s embrace.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:17 pm

    That was a great chapter. My favorite part was the ending when Maxie was dreaming about Max. I can't wait to read chapter 3.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 4:56 pm

    Here's chapter 3:

    Chapter 3
    Kristi vs. Ria

    It’s the next day now. Ria walked in the stables and started go over where Red is. Kristi stepped in front of Ria.
    “Where do you think you’re going?” Kristi asked.
    “I was going over to talk to Red.” Ria answered.
    “Well Red is mine got that.” Kristi said.
    “He doesn’t belong to anyone and he told me that he doesn’t like that way.” Ria replied.
    “Well he’s going to because I always get what I want.” Kristi said.
    “That’s because you’re a spoiled brat.” Ria replied.
    “You take that back.” Kristi yelled.
    “No I won’t because it’s the truth whether you like it or not.” Ria screamed.
    “I’m not spoiled.” Kristi yelled.
    “Yes you are.” Ria screamed.
    “No I’m not.” Kristi yelled.
    “Yes.” Ria screamed.
    “No.” Kristi yelled.
    Red came running over.
    “Girls stop fighting.” Red said.
    Ria rolled her eyes.
    “Kristi started it.” Ria replied.
    “I don’t care who started because it’s end right now.” Red said.
    “But Red.” Kristi replied.
    “Don’t but Red me because all you are is trouble and this place would better of without you.” Red said.
    Kristi’s eyes fill with tears and she ran off.
    “Don’t you think that was a little rude?” Ria asked.
    “Yes maybe a little but with her around I would never get the chance to tell that girl that I like how I feel because she won’t interfere.” Red answered.
    “Who is this girl that you like?” Ria asked.
    “I’m not ready to say just yet.” Red answered.
    “Oh that’s okay I understand.” Ria said.
    Ria walked off and Red sighed deeply.
    “If only I had the nerve to tell that’s you I like Ria.” Red thought to himself.
    Stevie, Carole and Lisa are close by.
    “Have you noticed how Red has been acting lately?” Stevie asked.
    “Yeah I have noticed and it’s almost like he’s in love with someone but to shy to tell them for fear they won’t feel the same way about him.” Carole answered.
    Ria goes back to where she’s staying with Maxie. Maxie looked at Ria.
    “Is there something wrong?” Maxie asked.
    Ria sighed.
    “Kristi probably won’t be hanging around anymore.” Ria answered.
    “Why is that?” Maxie asked.
    “Red told that it would be better around here without her.” Ria answered.
    “I have to agree with on that one because she’s nothing but trouble with a capital T.” Maxie answered.
    Maxie goes to the stables to see her horse Maxine. Maxine neighed when she seen Maxie. Maxie smiled. Maxi walked into the stable and over to Maxie.
    “Good morning Maxie.” Max said.
    Maxie smiled.
    “Morning to you too.” Maxie replied.
    Max smiled a little.
    “How are you doing today?” Max asked.
    “I’m doing just fine and this place is amazing.” Maxie answered.
    Max smiled again.
    “I’m glad that you think that and I totally love it here.” Max said.
    Deborah walked into the stables than sudden noticed Max with Maxie.
    “MAX.” Deborah yelled.
    “Yikes, I have to go.” Max said.
    Maxi walked over to Deborah.
    “What do you want?” Max asked.
    “Don’t use that tone with me and I wanted to know what you were doing hanging out with the new girl.” Deborah answered.
    “I’m sorry Deborah and I was just trying to make her comfortable here.” Max answered.
    Deborah sighed and looked over at Maxie.
    “She’s very pretty.” Deborah said.
    “Yeah I guess.” Max replied.
    Deborah sighed and walked off. Veronica walked over to Red.
    “What did you say to Kristi?” Veronica asked.
    “I just told her that this place would be better without her because all she does is cause trouble here.” Red answered.
    “Why would you say something like that?” Veronica asked.
    “It’s the truth and I would never be able to tell the girl that I like how I feel about her with Kristi around because she’d just ruin things.” Red answered.
    “Who do you like?” Veronica asked.
    “I’d rather not say.” Red answered.
    Ria walked into the stable and over to her house Ruby.
    “Hi Ruby.” Ria said.
    Ruby neighed and nudged up to Ria. Ria smiled a little. Red walked over to Ria.
    “I think she wants her to ride her.” Red replied.
    Ria started to step away.
    “No I can’t.” Ria said.
    “Come Ria, it’s like I told the only not to be afraid is to get back on.” Red replied.
    “But Red, I just don’t know.” Ria said.
    “I believe in you and I know you can do it.” Red replied.
    “Thanks Red that means a lot coming for you.” Ria said.
    “Do you want help getting into the saddle?” Red asked.
    “That would be nice.” Ria answered.
    Red helped Ria up into the saddle. Ria whimpered in fear.
    “Don’t Ria I’ll be with you the whole time.” Red said.
    Ria nodded her head.
    “Giddy up Ruby.” Ria replied.
    Ruby started to trot a little. Red is holding on the reigns and walked beside Ria. Maxie noticed and gasped. Stevie looked at Maxie.
    “What it is?” Stevie asked.
    “It’s Ria, she riding Ruby again.” Maxie answered.
    Stevie turned to where Ria is riding Ruby. Maxie ran over to Max and Deborah.
    “Can I use the phone?” Maxie asked.
    “Yeah sure can and if you follow me I’ll show you where it is.” Max answered.
    “Gladly, I’d follow you to ends of the world.” Maxie thought to herself.
    Max started to walk off and Maxie followed him. Max stopped by the phone. Maxie picked up the receiver and dialed Ria’s number. Kendra picked up the receiver.
    “Kenley residence Kendra speaking.” Kendra said.
    “Hi Mrs. Kenley it’s Maxie.” Maxie replied.
    Kendra smiled a little.
    “How are things at Pine Hollow?” Kendra asked.
    “Things are great and Ria is riding Ruby again.” Maxie answered.
    “Really?” Kendra asked.
    “Yes really thanks to the stable hand Red O’Malley because he’s helped be confident in herself again.” Maxie answered.
    “Well that’s great and thanks for calling me.” Kendra said.
    Maxie and Kendra hung up on each other. Max looked at Maxie.
    “Who did you phone?” Max asked.
    “I phoned Ria’s mother to tell her that Ria is riding Ruby again.” Maxie answered.
    “What did her mother say when you told her?” Max asked.
    “She’s said that was great and thanked me for calling her to tell her about it.” Maxie answered.
    A few hours later Ria is dreaming of being Red’s girlfriend. Red is dreaming over Ria and telling her how he feels so that she can be his girlfriend. Maxie is dreaming of one day being Max. Deborah and Max are sleeping in each other’s embrace.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:19 pm

    That was a great chapter. My favorite part is the part between Max and Maxie.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:07 pm

    Deedee's Girl wrote:That was a great chapter. My favorite part is the part between Max and Maxie.

    I had a feeling that you'd like that part.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:07 pm

    Here's chapter 4:

    Chapter 4
    Ria Wins Red’s Heart

    It’s the day after Red got Ria to ride Ruby again. Red is in the stables doing his work when suddenly he finds himself thinking about Ria. Red sighed than started to sing You Know I Will by Lucas Grabeel.
    There's a hill we gotta climb
    There's a treasure we must find
    The two of us as friends
    We're ready to take on the world
    We'll see who can tough the sky
    We'll see who can jump that high
    Everyday is an adventure
    We're ready to take on the world
    And through all the ups and downs
    I'll always be around
    You know when nothing goes your way
    When nothing goes your way
    You know I will
    I stand between you and your darkest fears
    You know I will
    I'll be the shoulder for your falling tears
    You know I will
    I'll be behind you 'til you're in the clear
    When the sunlight shows it's face
    You and me, we tae our place
    We're legendary heroes
    We're ready to take on the world
    So then let the chase begin
    If we go, we both will win
    When we're having fun
    There's no one else in the world
    And if you slip and fall off track
    I'll carry you on my back
    You know when nothing goes your way
    When nothing goes your way
    You know I will
    I stand between you and your darkest fears
    You know I will
    I'll be the shoulder for your falling tears
    You know I will
    I'll be behind you 'til you're in the clear
    And through all the ups and downs
    I'll always be around
    You know when nothing goes your way
    When nothing goes your way
    You know I will
    I stand between you and your darkest fears
    You know I will
    I'll be the shoulder for your falling tears
    You know I will
    I'll be behind you 'til you're in the clear
    You know I will

    Max walked over to Red.
    “Why are you singing?” Max asked.
    “I just felt like it.” Red answered.
    “Yeah right like I believe that.” Max said.
    “Alright you want to truth well here it is I’m in love with Ria but I don’t how to tell her.” Red replied.
    “Well you better tell her soon before the feelings eat alive inside.” Max said.
    Red sighed.
    ~Meanwhile where Maxie and Ria are staying~
    Ria hasn’t woken up yet. Maxie decided to go check on Ria. Maxie walked into Ria’s room.
    “Are you getting up?” Maxie asked.
    “No, I’m not.” Ria answered.
    “Why not?” Maxie asked.
    “I tried to get up but I got dizzy and fell back down.” Ria answered.
    “Are you sick?” Maxie asked.
    “Yeah I am.” Ria answered.
    Maxie put her head on Ria’s forehead to find out that she’s burning up. Maxie gasped than walked to the stables. Maxie let out a long sigh. Red and Max looked at her.
    “What’s wrong Maxie?” Max asked.
    “I’m worried about Ria.” Maxie answered.
    “What’s wrong with her?” Red asked in a concerned voice.
    “She’s sick.” Maxie answered.
    Red gasped than ran off to where Ria is.
    “What’s up with him?” Maxie asked.
    “He’s in love with Ria.” Max answered.
    “Really he is?” Maxie asked.
    “Yeah really he is but he doesn’t know how to tell her.” Max answered.
    “Well you should because she’s in love with him too.” Maxie said.
    “Are you serious?” Max asked.
    “Yes I am.” Maxie answered.
    Red finally reached Ria. Ria looked at Red.
    “What are you doing here?” Ria asked.
    “Maxie told Max and me that you were sick which got me worried.” Red answered.
    “Why would you worry about me?” Ria asked.
    Red sighed than walked over to Ria’s bed and sat next to her.
    “I care about you that’s why.” Red answered.
    “You care about me?” Ria asked.
    “That’s what I said.” Red answered.
    “Why do you care about me?” Ria asked.
    Red took a deep breath.
    “I need to ask you something before I answered that.” Red answered.
    “Okay than ask away.” Ria said.
    “Do you remember when I told you that were someone that I liked?” Red asked.
    “Yeah I remember but you won’t say who it was.” Ria answered.
    “I’m going to sing a song to help you figure it out.” Red said.
    “Oh okay than.” Ria replied.
    “The song is Hanging By A Moment by Lifehouse.” Red replied.
    Ria smiled and Red started singing.
    Desperate for changing, starving for truth
    I'm closer to where I started while chasing after you
    I'm falling even more in love with you
    Letting go of all I've held on to
    I'm standing here until you make me move
    I'm hanging by a moment here with you
    Forgetting all I'm lacking, completely incomplete
    I'll take your invitation, you take all of me now
    I'm falling even more in love with you
    Letting go of all I've held on to
    I'm standing here until you make me move
    I'm hanging by a moment here with you
    I'm living for the only thing I know
    I'm running and not quite sure where to go
    And I don't know what I'm diving into
    Just hanging by a moment here with you
    There's nothing else to lose, there's nothing else to find
    There's nothing in the world that can change my mind
    There is nothing else
    There is nothing else
    There is nothing else
    Desperate for changing, starving for truth
    I'm closer to where I started while chasing after you
    I'm falling even more in love with you
    Letting go of all I've held on to
    I'm standing here until you make me move
    I'm hanging by a moment here with you
    I'm living for the only thing I know
    I'm running and not quite sure where to go
    And I don't know what I'm diving into
    Just hanging by a moment here with you
    Just hanging by a moment
    Hanging by a moment
    Hanging by a moment
    Hanging by a moment here with you

    “Is the girl that you like me?” Ria asked.
    Red nodded his head.
    “Yeah it is you.” Red answered.
    Ria smiled than hugged Red. Red smiled too.
    “I’m so happy to hear you say because I fell the same way about you.” Ria said.
    Red stared at Ria.
    “Serious you are?” Red asked.
    “Yes I am and you have incredibly gorgeous singing voice.” Ria answered.
    Ria sighed deeply. Red get worried look on his face. Ria went to get up but got dizzy and goes to fall back but Red caught her in his arms. Ria looked at Red.
    “Are you going to be okay my darling?” Red asked.
    “Yeah I just need to take it easy and not get up so fast.” Ria answered.
    Red smiled a little. Ria set up slowly and Red wrapped his arms around her. Ria cuddled up to Red and closed her eyes. A few hours later Ria opened her eyes and looked up at Red.
    “How are you feeling now my darling?” Red asked.
    “I feel a lot better now thanks to handsome.” Ria answered.
    Red smiled than leaned in and kissed Ria. Ria gasped. A few minutes later Red broke the kiss and left. Ria smiled when Maxie came in.
    “What are you so happy about?” Maxie asked.
    “Red and I admit our feelings to each other than before he left he kissed me.” Ria answered.
    “That’s great for you and I wish that would happen for me but let’s face it won’t because Max is married.” Maxie said.
    “Don’t give up because I don’t think their marriage is going to last much longer.” Ria replied.
    “What makes you say that?” Maxie asked.
    “I’ve seen the way Deborah gets when Max spends time around you and not her.” Ria answered.
    Maxie sighed.
    “I really hope that you’re right because I’m so in love with him.” Maxie said.
    Ria got to her feet and hugged Maxie. A few hours later Ria is sleeping dreaming of her future with Red and Red is dreaming of his future with Ria. Maxie is dreaming about Ria said about Max and Deborah not being married much longer. Max and Deborah are sleeping in each other’s embrace.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:16 pm

    That was a great chapter. My favorite part was the ending when Maxie was dreaming about Max and Deborah not being married anymore.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:13 pm

    Deedee's Girl wrote:That was a great chapter. My favorite part was the ending when Maxie was dreaming about Max and Deborah not being married anymore.

    I had a feeling that you'd like that part.


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    Re: Cross My Heart (My First Saddle Club Story)

    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Sat Mar 21, 2009 9:43 am

    Here's chapter 5:

    Chapter 5
    A Sudden Divorce

    It’s been a few days since Ria got sick. Max is sitting in his office when Deborah walked in.
    “Max, we need to talk.” Deborah said.
    “About what?” Max asked.
    “Us.” Deborah answered.
    “What about us?” Max asked.
    “Well lately I’ve noticed that things aren’t the same between us and the feelings that I had for you just aren’t there anymore.” Deborah answered.
    “Yeah I know I’ve been feeling the same way.” Max said.
    “Really you have?” Deborah asked.
    “Yes really.” Max answered.
    “What should we do about?” Deborah asked.
    “The only I can think of is to get a divorce.” Max answered.
    Max and Deborah go to get a divorce. Max returned to the Pine Hollow. Deborah went back to the city. Mrs. Regnery walked over to her son and noticed right away that his wedding band is gone.
    “Where’s your wedding band?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “I got rid of it because Deborah and I got divorced.” Max answered.
    “Why on earth did you do that?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “That’s simple we just don’t feel the same about each other.” Max answered.
    “Is there someone else?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “Well sort of but I’d rather say just yet.” Max answered.
    Max walked off. Ria was close by and she heard everything. Ria ran to where Maxie is.
    “Guess what?” Ria asked.
    “I don’t want to guess.” Maxie answered.
    “Max and Deborah got divorced.” Ria said.
    “Are you really serious?” Maxie asked.
    “Yeah I am and he also said that was someone else that he liked but didn’t’ want to say anything.” Ria answered.
    Maxie smiled. Ria walked to the stables and over to Ruby. Ruby neighed. Red walked up behind Ria and covered her eyes with his hands.
    “Guess who?” Red asked.
    “I know that it’s you it’s Red.” Ria answered.
    Red took his hands away and spun Ria around in his arms. Ria looked at Red. Red leaned and kissed Ria. Maxie is watching and sighed out loud. Max walked over to Maxie.
    “What’s wrong?” Max asked.
    “I’m so jealousy of Ria because I want what she has with Red.” Maxie answered.
    “Yeah same here.” Max said.
    “Ria told me what happen between you and Deborah.” Maxie replied.
    “Well you know that old saying some things aren’t meant to be.” Max said.
    “Do you mean that you weren’t meant to be with Deborah?” Maxie asked.
    “Yeah that’s actually what I mean.” Max answered.
    “Who are you meant to be with than?” Maxie asked.
    “I’m not sure on that one yet but when I know I’ll let you know.” Max answered.
    Maxie smiled than started to leave but Max grabbed her arm.
    “What?” Maxie asked.
    “Please don’t go.” Max answered.
    “Why not?” Maxie asked.
    “I just don’t feel being alone right now.” Max answered.
    Maxie smiled a little. Max smiled a little too.
    “Alright I’ll stay.” Maxie said.
    Max smiled again.
    “Wow Maxie is so beautiful.” Max thought to himself.
    Maxie noticed Max deep in thought.
    “What are you thinking about?” Maxie asked.
    “I’d rather not discuss it right now.” Max answered.
    “That’s okay I understand.” Maxie said.
    Max sighed.
    “I need an idea to for something fun to do.” Max replied.
    “How about having a talent night?” Maxie asked.
    “That’s a good idea and thanks.” Max answered.
    “Yeah I know it was and you’re welcome.” Maxie said.
    “When should we have the talent night?” Max asked.
    “I think it should be on Friday night.” Maxie answered.
    “That’s sounds good to me and I’m going to need some help getting it organized.” Max said.
    “I’ll help you organized it.” Maxie replied.
    “Thanks Maxie and you’re the greatest.” Max said as he hugged Maxie.
    Maxie smiled.
    “You’re welcome.” Maxie replied as she hugged Max back.
    Max’s mother is walking by the office and sees them.
    “Could I speak to you now Max?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “Yeah sure mom.” Max answered.
    Max sighed than followed his mother out of earshot.
    “What’s going on here?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “I was just hugging her because she came with a really good idea to have some fun around here and she offered to help me organized it.” Max answered.
    “Do you like her?” Mrs. Regnery asked.
    “I don’t’ have to discuss that with you because it’s none of your business.” Max answered as walked off.
    “MAX GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW AND DON’T WALK AWAY FROM ME WHEN I’M TALKING TO YOU.” Mrs. Regnery yelled.
    Max shook his head and continued walking. Mrs. Regnery sighed. Max walked back over to Maxie.
    “What was that all about?” Maxie asked.
    “My mother is just jumping to conclusions.” Max answered.
    Maxie sighed. Max and Maxie get things ready for the Talent Night. A few hours Max is bed and finds himself dreaming of Maxie. Maxie is dreaming of Max. Red and Ria are dreaming of each other.


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    That was a great chapter. My favorite part were the parts between Max and Maxie.


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    Post by ♫Sweet Girl♫ on Sat Mar 21, 2009 9:02 pm

    Deedee's Girl wrote:That was a great chapter. My favorite part were the parts between Max and Maxie.

    I had a feeling that you'd like that part.


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    Post by kittyfan on Thu May 07, 2009 8:19 pm

    wow good story so far rolanada
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    Post by ♥Ronald McDonald's Wife♥ on Thu May 07, 2009 9:55 pm

    krazyinlovewithchad wrote:wow good story so far rolanada

    I totally agree with you on that, Jennifer.


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